GRE argument 229提纲分析汇总

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编辑点评: 提纲是作者构思谋篇的具体体现。便于作者有条理地安排材料、展开论证。提纲在GRE写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起,我们将对GRE argument进行分析,弄清写作思路,这样才能让GRE argument得高分。

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题目题材:管理运营

gre argument 229题目:

The following appeared as part of a memo from the manager of a hazardous-waste disposal company.

"Our new plan will help us better protect our staff against exposure to toxic chemicals(3): we are fitting each new(1) safety suit with an alarm that will sound in the main control booth when the suit is punctured(2). The control booth will notify the managers on duty, who will then take the necessary steps to ensure employees' safety. In addition to the obvious safety-related benefits, the fast reaction time will ensure minimal work stoppage(4) and thus result in increased worker productivity and company profitability(5,6)."

提纲:

(1)The manager does not inform us if all the staff will be equipped with this new suit.

(2)We are not informed about the working mechanism of the alarming system, there is possibility of system failure, and the manager fails to indicate if there is any emergency strategy in case of system failure.

(3)Fitting the alarm on safety suits may not sufficiently protect staff against all chemical hazards.

(4)The manager fails to illustrate that most work stoppage are caused by problems which could be prevented by the new suits.

(5)The system in itself could not guarantee increased worker productivity and company profitability.

(6)We do not know the expenditure of installing the entire system, the company’s profits would probably decline due to the new system.

注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。希望大家都能写出好作文。

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