难易程度:★
题目题材:保健
gre argument 187题目:
The following appeared as part of an article in a health magazine.
"A new discovery warrants a drastic change in the diets of people living in the United States. Two scientists have recently suggested that omega -3 fatty acids (found in some fish and fish oils) play a key role in mental health. Our ancestors, who ate less saturated fat and more polyunsaturated fat, including omega -3 fatty acids, were much less likely to suffer from depression than we are today(1). Moreover, modern societies—such as those in Japan and Taiwan—that consume large quantities of fish report depression rates(2,3) lower than that in the United States(4). Given this link between omega -3 fatty acids(5) and depression, it is important for all people(9,10) in the United States(6) to increase their consumption of fish(7,8) in order to prevent depression."
提纲:
1. Many other factors could explain why our ancestors were less likely to suffer from depression than we are today.
2. The definition of depression may be different in the United States and in Japan or Taiwan.
3. The reported depression rates may not reflect the actual status of mental health of people, many other factors could explain the lower reported rates.
4. The author unfairly attributes the lower incidence of depression in Japan and Taiwan to consuming large quantities of fish.
5. Even if eating fish is responsible for the lower depression rates, we cannot hastily assume that it is the omega-3 fatty acids contained in fish that result in the case.
6. Granted that eating a lot of fish do benefit Japanese and Taiwanese on their mental health, no evidence could ensure the same good effect will also occur among people in the United States through eating fish.
7. Omega-3 fatty acids are not necessarily contained only in fish, the author ignores many other solution to solve the problem.
8. Omega-3 fatty acids are not necessarily contained in all fish, thus consuming fish indiscriminatingly may not suffice to prevent depression.
9. The author fails to substantiate the assumption that all people in the United States need to consume a large amount of fish.
10.The author ignores the possibility that some Americans may not be willing to eat a lot of fish, some may not be fit for eating more fish, or some simply could not afford to do so.
注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。
无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。希望大家都能写出好作文。
>>点击查看GRE作文专题,阅读更多相关文章!
-
如何两个月拿下GRE?
每年都有无数小伙伴在纠结一个问题,两个月备考GRE到底够不够?事实上,全身心准备的话,完全够了。下面我们一起来看看如何备考,有哪些值得我们学习呢?
- GRE的文章源于哪里?
- GRE考前冲刺复习做到这5点提分最有效
- 2017年GRE考试报名开始啦!最新考试时间官方公布快来抢考位
- ETS官网查不了GRE分数怎么办?