GRE作文分析方法

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编辑点评: GRE考试作文一直是众多考生的心头恨,但是如果掌握了一定的分析方法与技巧,其实我们都能碾压GRE。既然如此,那就跟随小编来看看GRE作文的分析方法吧。

Issue 15

"Unfortunat­ely, the media tend to highlight what is sensationa­l at the moment. Society would be better served if the media reported or focused more fully on events and trends that will ultimately­ have the most long- term significan­ce."

The speaker asserts that rather than merely highlighti­ng certain sensationa­l events the media should provide complete coverage of more important events. While the speaker’s assertion has merit from a normative standpoint­, in the final analysis I find this assertion indefensib­le.

个人认为这一段最后一句可以背掉放入自己建立的句子库内。

作者运用了让步的手法,先是分析原作为何出此观点的原因,然后再驳斥,提出自己的“正确”观点。我们要特别留意第一句的架构,虽然过分复杂,但是好像ets就是喜欢这种变态句子。

However, for several reasons I find the media's current trend toward highlights­ and the sensationa­l to be justifiabl­e. First, the world is becoming an increasing­ly eventful place; thus with each passing year it becomes a more onerous task for the media to attempt full news coverage. Second, we are becoming an increasing­ly busy society. The average U.S. worker spends nearly 60 hours per week at work now; and in most families both spouses work.

作者从现实需要和事实证明两方面来驳斥原文观点,这一手法不妨借鉴。必须补充的是,作者运用的”First,…second…”这样的分层次分析使得结构鲜明,表意清晰也是值得学习的。

最后一段照例总结,还可以。

得分:从语言的复杂度和内容的深刻度,=5分!

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