2014年7月12日雅思写作真题回忆及范文

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编辑点评: 2014年7月12日雅思写作真题回忆及范文

Task1:拼图(线图+表格)

关于搜索引擎(Google,Yahoo等)的人数的时间变化

Task2:

some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while others argue that it is a good idea. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

有人认为政府机关的重要职位不适合年轻人,但另外一些人认为让年轻人担当些这样的职位是个好想法。讨论双方观点并给出你的观点

分析:

1)这道大作文的解题关键在于「年轻人」的特征与政府重要职位的本身性质之间的关联性

2)可以采取据理论证法,将抽象的important position予以形象化 

模板范文

首段:背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场:

The mightiness of a nation, to large extent, depends on its leader, in this sense, mounting number of young leaders are playing key roles in a nation's management. Conflicting ideas clash in determining whether or not it is feasible to inspire the youth to embark on some crucial jobs in the governments. To voice my opinion, younger people could and should assume the obligation of management in the governmental affairs. 

国家的强盛很大程度上在于其领袖,因而,很多年轻领袖在国家管理中发挥了重要作用。是否应该鼓励年轻人在国家管理中担任要职,人们观点差异。我认为,年轻人应该也能够在政府事务中担任要职。

二段:我的观点的展开:三个论据去支持年轻人在政府担任要职:

Indeed, plenty of evidence could be explored to justify that young leaders exert a beneficial influence on a nation's prosperity and triumph. The most glaring merit of young leader is that the multiplication of youthful officials or leaders in the governments will inject fresh vitality into the governments, for youngsters, in most cases, have creative mode of thinking, vigorous energy and enterprising spirit. Another merit deriving from young leaders is that they dare to explore the unknown, assume responsibility and challenge themselves. How can a nation become prosperous and mighty if its younger generation fails to be given the opportunities to grow and mature? Last, in comparison with senior leaders, younger leaders usually have less to worry about in terms of personal matters, therefore, they could devote themselves to their motherlands wholeheartedly. 

很多理由可以证实年轻人在政府中担任要职对于国家的繁荣和发展是有利好的。第一,年轻官员的增加会为政府发展注入新鲜活力,因为年轻人有创造性的思维,无穷的活力以及进取的精神。第二,年轻人敢于探索未知,挑战自己,程度责任。如果年轻人不能被赋予成长成熟的机会,国家如何可能变得繁荣富强。第三,对比年长的官员,年轻人可以全心投入,因为他们个人对于个人事务的关注较少。

三段:反对的意见:他人口吻:

However, still others remain suspicious of my stand. As a proverb goes, there is no garden without weeds. Some people argue that vital government works cannot be undertaken by younger people because so immature and inexperienced are the youngsters that they are more likely to commit blunders ranging from making wrong decisions to failing to fulfill their duties properly. Consequently, citizens' interests will be jeopardized and a nation's prospects will be put at risk if younger governmental officials account for the vast majority of administrative authorities. Still, it is argued that in comparison with the young, senior officials enjoy more superiorities in terms of policy making, crisis management and prospering the national economy.

很多人也许对于我的立场表示怀疑,毕竟,凡事有利弊。有人认为,年轻人不成熟,没有经验,重要的政府管理不能由他们承担,因为他们容易犯错,例如决策错误,或者不能履行责任。因此,如果年轻人在政府管理中占据多数,可能有损国民利益。另外,有人认为,对比年轻人,年长官员优势明显,尤其在制定策略,危机处理,繁荣经济等方面。

尾段:

In closing, my stand is that it is wise to encourage younger people to embark on some crucial governmental tasks, because they own infinite potentials and will benefit the nation in the long run. My suggestion is that senior officials should provide more guidance and assistance. 

我认为,鼓励年轻人从事政府重要职位是明智的,年轻人有无穷潜力,会使国家长远受益。我的建议是年长的官员应该给年轻人提供指导以及帮助。

全文总结:文无定法,该文章是只是雅思写作范文之一种。该文主题明确;行文简洁;逻辑清晰;论据合理;淡化模板;表达亮点。 

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