雅思写作真题和解析-2013.2.2

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2013年2月2日雅思写作考试

小作文:The bar chart show the percentage of male and female students getting grades(A and B)by subject area in 1996 and 2000.(4个柱状图,男女生在1996年和2000年不同学科的成绩对比。)

写作思路:按照4个图的顺序写4段,结论段比较所有图的异同。每个图既有趋势又有两者对比。

大作文:Some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV, others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up, discuss both and give your own opinion.(有些人认为儿童看电视没有好处,而其他人认为在儿童成长的过程中看电视能给他们带来积极的影响。请就两个方面进行讨论并给出自己的观点)

写作分析:参考过去出现的相关题目可以帮助同学们更好地解题

2008.01.10 TV/ video/ computer games: Good or bad

2008.05.10 Children watch tv: at home VS school

2009.05.16 Imagination and language skills: Read books Vs watch TV

2013.01.05 2009.05.16

2010.03.27 children more Tv, less activities, why? measures?

2010.09.25 Too much TV for children, How affect? What measures?

2010.11.04 Parents read for children Vs free choice on TV/internet/books

2007.12.15 Disasters & violence on TV: why, effects?

2007.11.17 Ads aimed at children should be banned?

第一段:看电视是孩子们很重要的课余活动,有些孩子甚至对电视成瘾

第二段:看电视太多的消极面

1.对身体健康不利 2. 减少和同龄人以及家人的互动与交流 3. 对智力发展不利 4. 有些电视内容不适合小孩子

第三段:适量有选择的看电视有益儿童发展1.增加知识,和探索世界的兴趣 2.丰富课余生活 3.和父母或同龄人一起看有助于更好的亲子或朋友互动

第四段:适量地选择适合孩子的电视节目,并且尽量和父母或同龄人一同看电视有助于孩子的健康发展,否则电视将对孩子产生消极影响。

真题详细点评

 

题目

What are the positive and negative effects of watching TV on children?
孩子们看电视的优缺点。

开头段
【背景句】

 As children have less time and opportunities to participate in outdoor activities, the influence of sedentary activities, such as watching television, has always been brought into the spotlight.

中间段1

优点:

  1. 健康的和有教育意义的电视节目可以帮助孩子们扩大眼界。

Healthy and educational TV programmes assist children in broadening their horizons.

  1. 利用空闲时间看电视也是孩子们一种很好的放松方式。

It is a good way that children relax and enjoy themselves by watching TV in spare time.

中间段2

缺点:

  1. 花过多时间看电视会对孩子们的身体健康产生严重的破坏。

To spend more time watching television causes serious damage to children's physical health.
【论证示范】
The reasons are twofold. For one thing, if children spend an inordinate amount of time on watching TV, they will have less time for sports. For another thing, children tend to consume large quantities of junk food while watching TV.As a result, their physical health will be undermined.

  1. 电视中可能会有一些暴力和色情的节目,会毒害青少年的思想。

There are probably some TV programmes concerning violence and pornography, which will corrupt youngsters’mind.

结尾段

In conclusion, though television watching can contribute to the Children’s development at certain degree, the risks in children’s physical and mental health will make more parents have second thoughts about their children’s television viewing.

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