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对于大多数考生来说,新托福写作并不是强项,所以借鉴高分和满分范文十分必要,就让我们以这一组范文来做认真研习吧。

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Some people like attending live performance rather than watching the same event on television. They think that will be enjoyable. Others like me, however, do not think so. There are no less than three disadvantages in attending a live performance rendered below:

First and foremost,people who will go to a live performance may not see or lister to clearly. Not all seats there are the best place.May be you will feel disappionted after attending it,and you must think the price for ticket is not worth that.

There is another factor that deserves some words here.The quality of the performance will depends on some external factors.Suppose that you go to a concert outdoors.Before you leave home, you have to consider how the whether will be go.It is likely that audiances are wet because of rain during the performance.So, even though the performance is in high quality,you may not feel comfortable more or less.

In addition, attending a live performance may waste your time. You must go there ahead of time,and you have to park.That will spend much time.

I can not deny that attending a live performance has its own merits.Nonetheless,based on the above discussion, I strongly disagree with the opionion that attending a live performance is more enjoyable.

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