托福写作:Plan for free time

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编辑点评: 本题要求讨论Plan for free time。这个题目倾向于选择“有计划”。因为不管做什么事情,多少都会有一些计划。至少知道从什么时候开始,到什么时候结束。罗列几个实现计划的好处。据几个实例。

Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully. Others choose not to make any plans at all for their free time. Compare the benefits of planning free-time activities with the benefits of not making plans. Which do you prefer — planning or not planning for your leisure time? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice.

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倾向于选择“有计划”。因为不管做什么事情,多少都会有一些计划。至少知道从什么时候开始,到什么时候结束。罗列几个实现计划的好处。据几个实例。

使用让步结构结尾:尽管确实有一些过程完全不需要计划,而计划也做不到面面俱到(cover all aspects; have every detail thought of -- think of every detail),但是适当的计划仍然是必要的。

为自己的空闲时间进行计划

(1)更好的利用时间。去哪里玩等等

(2)节省金钱。有些时候一些地方很便宜,有些时候特别贵

(3)和朋友玩的更愉快,开心。因为大家有计划。

如果不计划自由,想去哪里就去哪里

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Plan for free time

In my opinion it is always better to plan our free time because although it is considered leisure time but some people might need it to get certain things done that could not have been finished if they were left to be done another time.

Probably for most grown-ups free time is only during their weekends which is usually for one or two days only. It is actually a very short period of time if you have lots of things to be done. For this reason planning for leisure time is very important because there are lots of things that needs to be done and not all of theses things are for fun.

For adults, leisure time is not only about waking up late, spending the whole day in bed or in front of the television and reading some magazines. In fact if it is well planned, free time can be used to meet our friends, go to a restaurant, go to the cinema, go shopping or even read a nice book. Others may use it to do more important things such as taking up a new hobby or studying if they are students. Consequently their time needs to be organized very well in order to accomplish all the things they need to do compared to the short time they have.

On the other hand, if we do not keep a list or a schedule of the things that we should do, we may only finish a thing or two but time will never be enough for us to accomplish all the tasks we have. It seems to me that leisure time should not be left without planning because it is really important to many people.

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