托福写作:What famous athlete would you like to meet?

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编辑点评: 本题要求设想一个问题:当你有机会见到名人,你会想见谁?参考分析:希望碰到李宁,写起来容易些。如果体操这些词不会拼写,换成自己觉得熟悉的运动的运动员。

If you could meet a famous entertainer or athlete, who would that be, and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support yourchoice.

参考分析:

希望碰到李宁,写起来容易些(如果体操这些词不会拼写,换成自己觉得熟悉的运动的运动员)

(1)在体育上很成功。获得了很多奥运会金牌。

(2)在商业上很成功

(3)在业余和家庭生活中也很成功

参考范文:

What famous athlete would you like to meet?

If I have the opportunity to meet a famous entertainer or athlete, I would like tomeet Michael Jordan.

Jordan was neither tall nor strong in his childhood, but he never gave up playing basketball. He has huge success today as a legendary guy in the basketball history, and is a god for all the basketball fans all around the world. I think the reason of his success is because his diligence, courage and his strong inner desire to win. All theseare what I admire most of him.

Jordan won six championships of NBA. That was theheydays of Jordan.Six rings! That is every NBA player's dream. Someone spent many years in orderto get a ring but failed, like Carl Malone, and King Baylor.Jordangot six!His last ring was won by his exciting shoot, which was once considered the lastand perfect moment in his life and a best end for his history of playing basketball.

Jordan's name was linked with "perfect" when people mentioned Jordan.A great deal of courage is needed for one to break off the word "perfect" which he used years to establish, but Jordan did it. He came back again, not as a god, but as a common basketball player. He was no longer young and could not act has what he did when his young. There are even some fans that opposed him to come back; they did not want to see their god beatenby the youth. In the opposite,Jordandid quite well, though not as good as before, but better than what we allimagined. He, a nearly forty-year-old man with two in jured knees, led Wizardsget much better marks than it did last year. He could still sometimes score more than forty points. What support him is the steadfast belief he had and the strong love of basketball. This gave him the unbelievable strength.

If I saw him, I wanted to ask him how he managed to gain the desire and where does this love come from, maybe Jordan would just give me a smile and say, "I love this game!"

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