8个语法错误可能使用你的托福写作得分很低

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编辑点评: 托福考试当中,托福写作是一个很大的输出考试项目,较于托福口语部分,托福写作考试如何时间上允许的话,考生是有检查的机会的。那么在检查时我们重点要注意什么呢?语法是必须要检查的,这可能是你的作文低分的一个致命因素。这里小编为大家整理了托福写作的8个语法错误。

在托福写作当中,如果你的英语水平还不错的话,而你的作文始终得不到高分,那么最有可能让你作文得低分的原因就是语法原因了。这里小编为大家整理了托福写作考试中8个失分的语法错误,大家一起来学习一下吧。

1. 托福写作句子不完整。
不完整句子指的是句子当中缺少主语或谓语等,无法形成一个完整的句子。
比如:A movie that inspires deep emotions.(只有名词加定语从句,不是完整的句子)
应改为:She went to see “The Silver Star”, a movie that inspires deep emotions.
2. 托福写作句子不间断。
不间断句子指的是用逗号来连接两个完整的句子。
比如:There is increasingly widespread reliance on electronic mail, some people still resist using it, especially those who prefer handwritten letters.
应改为:Although there is increasingly widespread reliance on electronic mail, some people still resist using it, especially those who prefer handwritten letters.(根据两句之间的关系,加入连词)
3. 托福写作句子主谓不一致。
主谓不一致指的是句子中主语与谓语没有保持数的一致。
比如:Many students thinks tomorrow is a holiday.
应改为:Many students think tomorrow is a holiday.
再比如:The use of cell phones during concerts are not allowed.
应改为:The use of cell phones during concerts is not allowed.
4. 托福写作可数名词完整。
可数名词“裸奔”指的是可数名词之前没有冠词,也没有变为复数形式。
比如:Even expert or scholar specializing in a certain field might cover a vast spectrum of knowledge in order to succeed.
应改为:Even experts or scholars specializing in a certain field might cover a vast spectrum of knowledge in order to succeed.(可数名词变复数形式)

5. 托福写作but和however用法。
but和however都表示转折,但是but是连词,而however是副词,也就是说however是不能来连接两个独立分句的。
比如:Printed books are limited in space, however, space is not an issue for electronic ones.
应改为:Printed books are limited in space. However, space is not an issue for electronic ones. (用句号将原句分成两个独立分句)
6. 托福写作therefore用法。
therefore也是副词,表示“因此”,它也不能连接两个独立分句。
比如:Pupils always look to their teacher for guidance, therefore the influence that a teacher has could never be underestimated.
应改为:Pupils always look to their teacher for guidance; therefore the influence that a teacher has could never be underestimated.(用分号将两个独立分句连接起来)
或者:Pupils always look to their teacher for guidance, and therefore the influence that a teacher has could never be underestimated.(用and将两个独立分句连接起来)
7. 托福写作there be句型用法。
there be句型中be动词本身已经是谓语部分,不能再出现谓语动词。
比如:There are many people prefer to wear clothes made of natural fibers.
应改为:There are many people who prefer to wear clothes made of natural fibers.(后面prefer to改放到定语从句里)
8. 托福写作比较对象的对等。
在比较结构中,注意前后比较事物要对等。常用that和those来指代“比较结构”里先前提到的名词。
比如:The merits of serious movies far outweigh funny movies.
应改为:The merits of serious movies far outweigh those of funny movies.(those指代的是前半句的比较对象merits)
以上就是小编为大家整理的新托福写作8个语法错误,大家在备考时一定要注意积累,这样才能在考试当中避免出现这种错误。最后,小编预祝大家托福考试能取得理想的成绩。

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