英国班戈大学优质文书范文分享:我是热衷于扮演魔术师角色的法学生

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编辑点评: 本文将为大家分享英国班戈大学优质文书,这篇文书结构清晰、重点突出,对魔术表演的热爱这一兴趣成功吸引到招生官,并拿下该校法律专业的offer,一起来欣赏这篇文书吧。

班戈大学(Bangor University)成立于1884年,有着悠久的历史,原名是北威尔士大学University College of North Wales,。该校会计、银行与金融专业位列全英第一。本文将与大家分享成功申请该校法律专业的优质文书一篇,该专业在2018《卫报》英国法律专业中排在23位,一起来欣赏吧。

范文:
I am interested in studying a law degree after attending the local courts to observe law in action. I was intrigued by the roles of the different advocates for the defence and prosecution and the position of the defendant in the process. Following the experiences of observing cases, I believe my experience of ethics study and further philosophical underpinnings of A Level Religious Studies have given me the understanding of the issues of morality, justice, moral positions and ethical solutions within society. I am enthusiastic about studying law at university.
点评:第一段开门见山,直接谈对法律专业的兴趣。申请者提到观摩过当地多次庭审,强调其伦理、哲学和宗教的学习经历,展示其在法律上丰富的经验和学识架构上的身后积累。平铺直叙,显得真实简洁。
In studying ethics I have been particularly interested in ethical theories like Utilitarianism and Situation ethics which all attempt to answer ethical dilemmas and create a basis for ethical decision making. This has given me an interest in ethical solutions which is why I want to study law. Further in my studies of RS I have recognised the importance of understanding different cultures, belief systems and historically important figures such as Aristotle and Karl Marx who have all impacted on my opinions and ideas and given me stronger understanding of how the world operates.
点评:承接第一段进一步谈在伦理宗教上的学习,分析学习法律的深层次原因,展现出个人思考。
I feel that the historical perspectives attained through studying at modern history in terms of the events contributing towards the Russian revolution and the establishment of the Nazi movement pre-World War II will help me in considering the importance of the role of law within the establishment of society.
点评:前三段着重谈法律背后的知识架构,这一段介绍历史学识积累。从现代历史的角度研究俄国革命和二战前的纳粹运动会帮助理解法律在社会建设上的重要作用。
My studies in A Level English Language have helped me appreciate the role of power positions and the interplay of language in the establishment of roles and the interplay of roles within communication. As such the role of advocacy might draw from both the written and spoken word and appreciation of the nature of language in its interpretation in action.
点评:这一段则提到英语学习,一方面展现出对英国母语研究的兴趣,使招生官相信申请者的语言能力在英国学习生活不会有大问题,另一方面再次强调法律学习,英语帮助理解权力地位的作用,以及语言在角色的建立和沟通中的相互作用。这种做法使主题更加突出。
Out of school I enjoy developing my skills as a magician, which I feel demonstrates my aptitude, dedication and application of learning as I have been accepted as a member of the Ipswich Magic Society (and hope to join the Magic Circle now I am 18). This involves my attendance at Magic Society meetings and interaction with magicians across the region who are both my seniors and more experienced as professional magicians within the community. Within my role as a magician, I have gained considerable interpersonal skills working with individuals and crowds by entertaining at local charitable events such as the Framlingham annual ‘Sausage Fest’.
点评:这一段谈课外活动——申请者喜欢培养自己的魔术师技能,这是非常有趣的一个故事,相信招生官会非常愿意去了解。当然故事最后的重点还是要谈对自己的影响,成为魔术师使申请者有了更多的人际交往经验,并为当地人民带去了快乐。
I have provided entertainment and employment through card skills mastery for birthday parties, local entertainment nights and the school annual ‘Summer Fun Evening’. Within the magic society I am required to learn new tricks and perform within the monthly show nights to develop my standing within the magician community. I am an established guitarist and have performed solo at the local Open Mic circuit and at birthday parties accompanying singers. In addition to attaining a high level of accomplishment, I have performed at public houses, at my school prom, Christmas and summer church festivals and many family events. I have played football for local teams at league level since I was 10. This has involved travel around the county and play against and with team members from a variety of teams over the last decade. In addition I am a member of the gym which I attend regularly for weight lifting and fitness training. During sixth form I have been working for my father in the family business which has given me experience in terms.
点评:最后一段,申请者安排了自己的其他兴趣爱好,包括魔术表演活动,弹吉他、踢足球、举重等,展现出十足的活力。
整篇文书结构是比较清晰的,几个重点也得到了凸显,申请者没有大谈特谈自己的成就,一个充满活力且有丰富学识和独特见识的学生形象还是跃然纸上,值得预备役留学生们好好品味一番。

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