美国金融类研究生申请文书写作

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编辑点评: 申请美国学校的时候,肯定都会有申请文书写作,而很多同学也因为对此不重视而被理想的大学拒之门外。其实,申请文书中最主要的是个人陈述的写作,尤其是对于金融类研究生申请的同学来说。

1. 福德汉姆大学essay 题目之一:

Describe your great achievement to date. What effect has this achievement had on others?

The most fulfilling and successful achievement until now would dwell in the contribution to the Youth Volunteer Association, where I had executed the adjustment and programming in the light of the designed plan as the chairman.

My choice and perseverance derived the wellhead of passion and conviction. Accompanying with the periodic election for the higher position and many interviews, I made the growing transition and ultimately won the position of the chairman in junior due to my competitive qualification. As soon as the inaugural authority came to the force, I implemented a succession of reformation, which subsumed obligation rotation and establishment of evaluation regime. I also furnished the space and training for the reserved chairman developing in order to unfold the impartial and open competition. It was not very long that the watershed moment came after because the effect appeared increasingly in the way that the motivation and enthusiasm of the entire association members as well as the general leaders were appealed. Especially after every activity’s completion, every member got the chance to get familiar with the specialized task owing to the obligation rotation. Through the cohesiveness piled up from the association members, the regular affairs in Youth Volunteer Association had elementarily formed a fundamental and integral system under my direction.

In the subsequent innovative management, what confer me the great content and pride was the project management contraposing the chaotic volunteer service items under my cogitation. Many items such as personnel management in registration period, individual and psychological quality training and experiences sharing sessions had been correspondingly classified and hierarchically administrated. Lightened by operation model which was guided by separated projects, I realized the most valuable service item-- ‘Volunteer service Group for the disabled’ was worth the investing and further nominated as the brand project in our association on my own idea. For the adequate publicity in the prophase, the ‘Volunteer service Group for the disabled’ project had successively coalesced with Dalian Disabled Persons’ Federation and Wuchang Community of Zhongsha District in Dalian, cooperatively instituting the service base for young volunteers. It provided the service platform for 180 volunteers for the disabled in Dalian University of Technology and financial and spiritual aid for more than 300 invalids from Wuchang Community. In conformity to the stunning stage of volunteer service, our association also launched the dactylology corner in our university, enabling the exchanges between the amateurs of sign language. In 2011, having been reported by 8 bight Medias in Dalian, the progressive Youth Volunteer Association, together with the perfected projects defeated thousands of volunteer service groups in Dalian and eventually won the excellent prize of ‘The Young in Action’ of Dalian. Afterwards, Dalian Tianjian Website interview me as the initiator of ‘Volunteer service Group for the disabled’ project.

The perfection of association system, the multi-channels aids for the disabled and the coalition of many communities and associations are not the accomplishment that effectuates my destination, but to render the public to be aware of volunteers and get close the disabled reveals my benevolence for the whole society, even for the human beings.

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