GRE argument 241提纲分析汇总

所属专题:GRE作文  来源:互联网    要点:GRE考试  
编辑点评: 提纲是作者构思谋篇的具体体现。便于作者有条理地安排材料、展开论证。提纲在GRE写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起,我们将对GRE argument进行分析,弄清写作思路,这样才能让GRE argument得高分。

难易程度:★★

题目题材:失业,就业

gre argument 241题目:

The following appeared in a memo at the XYZ company.

"When XYZ lays off employees, it pays Delany Personnel Firm to offer those employees assistance in creating resumés and developing interviewing skills, if they so desire. Laid-off employees have benefited greatly from Delany's services: last year those who used Delany found jobs much more quickly than did those who did not (1). Recently, it has been proposed that we use the less-expensive Walsh Personnel Firm in place of Delany. This would be a mistake because eight years ago, when XYZ was using Walsh, only half of the workers we laid off at that time found jobs within a year (2, 3, 4, and 5). Moreover, Delany is clearly superior, as evidenced by its bigger staff (7) and larger number of branch offices (6). After all, last year (10) Delany's clients took an average of six months to find jobs, whereas Walsh's clients took nine (8, 9)."

提纲:

(1)The author unfairly attributes the successful employment result of the laid-off employees who used Delany to Delany’s assistance.

(2)The fact that only half of the laid-off workers found jobs within a year may not result from ineffectiveness of Walsh.

(3)Many factors could explain the differences between the employment results of using each company.

(4)Without any comparative data, we cannot determine if the employment result of workers who use Walsh eight years ago are poor.

(5)Many conditions would have changed during the past eight years.

(6)The size of staff and number of branch offices do not necessarily indicate the quality and effectiveness of a company’s service.

(7)A bigger staff may just indicate that the efficiency at Delany is lower.

(8)There is no significant difference between finding job within six months and within nine months.

(9)Without detailed description of jobs found by Delany’s clients and Walsh’s clients respectively, and without more information about their clients, we cannot evaluate which company is more effective.

(10)A single year's placement statistics hardly suffices to draw any firm conclusions.

注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。希望大家都能写出好作文。

>>点击查看GRE作文专题,阅读更多相关文章!

最新2022GRE考试信息由沪江留学网提供。

请输入错误的描述和修改建议,建议采纳后可获得50沪元。

错误的描述:

修改的建议: