GRE argument 239提纲分析汇总

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编辑点评: 提纲是作者构思谋篇的具体体现。便于作者有条理地安排材料、展开论证。提纲在GRE写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起,我们将对GRE argument进行分析,弄清写作思路,这样才能让GRE argument得高分。

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题目题材:社会

gre argument 239题目:

The following appeared as an editorial in the local newspaper of Dalton.

"When the neighboring town of Williamsville adopted a curfew four months ago that made it illegal for persons under the age of 18 to loiter or idle in public places after 10 p.m., youth crime(2) in Williamsville dropped by 27 percent during curfew hours(1,2). In Williamsville's town square(5), the area where its citizens were once most outraged at the high crime rate, not a single crime has been reported(4) since the curfew was introduced. Therefore, to help reduce its own rising crime rate, the town of Dalton should adopt the same kind of curfew(6,7,8). A curfew that keeps young people at home late at night will surely control juvenile delinquency(9) and protect minors from becoming victims of crime(10)."

提纲:

(1)We are not informed about the variation in crime committed before curfew hours.

(2)We do not know if crime of other type also dropped since the curfew was introduced.

(3)The decline in Williamsville's over­all crime rate is not necessarily attributable to the curfew.

(4)We do not know how many crimes were committed at the town square but not reported.

(5)The amelioration of the town square may not be representative of the situation of the entire town.

(6)We do not know what fraction of all crime in Dalton is youth crime, thus could not evaluate if the same kind of curfew will also be effective in Dalton.

(7)Dalton might differ from Williamsville in ways that would undermine the curfew's effectiveness in Dalton.

(8)There are many other ways to reduce Dalton’s crime rate.

(9)Granted that the proposed curfew would reduce Dalton's overall crime rate, the author unfairly infers that the curfew would also curb juvenile delinquency.

(10)Crimes against youths might occur during non-curfew hours, thus the inference that the curfew would protect minors from be­coming crime victims is unwarranted.

注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。希望大家都能写出好作文。

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