GRE argument 234提纲分析汇总

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编辑点评: 提纲是作者构思谋篇的具体体现。便于作者有条理地安排材料、展开论证。提纲在GRE写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起,我们将对GRE argument进行分析,弄清写作思路,这样才能让GRE argument得高分。

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题目题材:生活,保健

gre argument 234题目:

The following appeared in a newspaper feature story.

"There is now evidence that the relaxed manner of living in small towns promotes better health and greater longevity than does the hectic pace of life in big cities. Businesses in the small town of Leeville(5) report fewer days of sick leave(1) taken by individual workers than do businesses in the nearby large city of Mason City(5). Furthermore, Leeville has only one physician(2) for its one thousand residents(3), but in Mason City the proportion of physicians to residents is five times as high. And the average age of Leeville residents is significantly higher(4) than that of Mason City residents. These findings suggest that people seeking longer and healthier lives should consider moving to small communities(6,7)."

提纲:

(1)The number of days of sick leave taken by individuals does not necessarily indicate their health status.

(2)The proportion of physicians to residents is not a good indication of the health level of citizens.

(3)The fact that Leeville has lower proportion of physicians to residents may just suggest that residents here may have difficulty in finding adequate health care.

(4)The author ignores many other differences that would contribute to the higher average age of Leeville residents.

(5)Leeville and Mason City are not necessarily representative of all small towns and big cities.

(6)Granted that living in small towns does promote better health and greater longevity, we cannot ensure that living at small communities would have the same advantages.

(7)The author fails to consider the disadvantages and inconveniences of living in small towns.

注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。希望大家都能写出好作文。

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