GRE argument 233提纲分析汇总

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编辑点评: 提纲是作者构思谋篇的具体体现。便于作者有条理地安排材料、展开论证。提纲在GRE写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起,我们将对GRE argument进行分析,弄清写作思路,这样才能让GRE argument得高分。

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题目题材:工程建设

gre argument 233题目:

The following appeared in a memo from the vice president of a company that builds shopping malls throughout the country.

"The surface of a section of Route 101(1), paved two years ago by McAdam Road Builders, is now badly cracked and marred by dangerous potholes. In another part of the state, a section of Route 66(1), paved by Appian Roadways more than four years ago, is still in good condition(2). Appian Roadways has recently purchased state-of-the-art paving machinery, and it has hired a new quality-control manager(3,4,5). Because of its superior work and commitment to quality, we should contract with Appian Roadways rather than McAdam Road Builders(9) to construct the access roads(6,8) for all(7) our new shopping malls."

提纲:

(1)Only one of all roads built by each company is compared, and only one section of each road is compared, thus we cannot evaluate the overall quality of construction of the two companies.

(2)Many other factors that would influence the condition of a road are ignored by the president.

(3)The arguer does not provide any information about the machinery used and the status of quality-control personnel at McAdam.

(4)No information about the performance of the new quality-control manager at Appian is provided.

(5)Many factors besides equipment and on-site management would also affect the quality of a pavement job.

(6)Granted that the quality of routes paved by Appian is superior, we cannot guarantee Appian could also do an excellent job in constructing the access roads for shopping malls.

(7)The president hastily assumes that Appian is capable of constructing the access roads of all new shopping malls.

(8)The president fails to consider if Appian are willing to contract with the company to construct access roads.

(9)Other competent companies might be available for the president to choose from.

注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。希望大家都能写出好作文。

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