GRE argument 225提纲分析汇总

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编辑点评: 提纲是作者构思谋篇的具体体现。便于作者有条理地安排材料、展开论证。提纲在GRE写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起,我们将对GRE argument进行分析,弄清写作思路,这样才能让GRE argument得高分。

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题目题材:人事,选举

gre argument 225题目:

The following appeared as part of a letter to the editor of a local newspaper.

"During her three years in office, Governor Riedeburg has shown herself to be a worthy leader. Since she took office, crime has decreased, the number of jobs created per year has doubled(2), and the number of people choosing to live in our state has increased(1). These trends are likely to continue(3) if she is reelected. In addition, Ms. Riedeburg has promised(4) to take steps to keep big companies here(6), thereby providing jobs for any new residents(5). Anyone who looks at Ms. Riedeburg's record can tell that she is the best-qualified candidate(7) for governor."

提纲:

(1)The author unfairly attribute the decline in crime, increase in the number of new job opportunities and number of people who choose to live here to the leadership of Riedeburg.

(2)The author fails to inform us how many workers have been laid off since Riedeburg took office.

(3)The author unfairly assumes that these trends will continue in the future.

(4)We cannot guarantee that Riedeburg would definitely keep her promise.

(5)The author provides no evidence that these employers would be either willing or able to hire new residents.

(6)Reideburg’s promise may just suggest that some big companies are not willing to stay in our state.

(7)The author fails to consider other competent candidates.

注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。希望大家都能写出好作文。

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