GRE argument 217提纲分析汇总

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编辑点评: 提纲是作者构思谋篇的具体体现。便于作者有条理地安排材料、展开论证。提纲在GRE写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起,我们将对GRE argument进行分析,弄清写作思路,这样才能让GRE argument得高分。

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题目题材:健身休闲,商业

gre argument 217题目:

The following appeared in a brochure promoting the purchase of local franchises for a national chain of gyms.

"Now is the time to invest in a Power-Lift Gym franchise so that you can profit from opening one of our gyms in your town. Consider the current trends: Power-Lift Gyms(1) are already popular among customers in 500 locations(2,5), and national surveys(2) indicate increasing concern with weight loss and physical fitness(3). Furthermore, last year's sales of books and magazines on personal health totaled more than $50 million, and purchases of home exercise equipment almost doubled(4,5). Investing now in a Power-Lift Gym franchise will guarantee a quick profit(6,7)."

提纲:

(1)The author fails to inform us the profitability of former Power-Lift Gyms.

(2)The national trend and popularity of Power-Lift Gyms in other 500 locations do not necessarily ensure the gyms will be profitable in every specific region.

(3)The result of the national survey does not indicate that people who are concerned about weight loss and physical fitness will also be interested in Power-Lift Gyms.

(4)The sales of personal health books and magazines and the number of purchases of home exercise equipment could tell nothing about the profitability of Power-Lift Gyms.

(5)The fact that Power-Lift Gyms are already popular in 500 locations, and that purchased of home exercise equipment doubled may just indicate that the demand for such gyms will decline.

(6)We do not know the cost of a Power-Lift Gym, and the detailed process of installation and management of the gym, thus a quick profit cannot be guaranteed.

(7)Without knowing other requirements of opening such a gym we could not make the decision.

注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。希望大家都能写出好作文。

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