GRE argument 205提纲分析汇总

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编辑点评: 提纲是作者构思谋篇的具体体现。便于作者有条理地安排材料、展开论证。提纲在GRE写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起,我们将对GRE argument进行分析,弄清写作思路,这样才能让GRE argument得高分。

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题目题材:社会治安

gre argument 205题目:

The following appeared in a recommendation from the president of Amburg's Chamber of Commerce.

"Last October the city of Belleville installed high intensity lighting in its central business district, and vandalism there declined almost immediately(1). The city of Amburg has recently begun police patrols on bicycles in its business district(3) but the rate of vandalism there remains constant. Since high intensity lighting is apparently the most effective way(4) to combat crime(7), we should install such lighting throughout(6) Amburg(2,5). By reducing crime in this way, we can revitalize the declining neighborhoods in our city(8)."

提纲:

(1)The president unfairly assumes that it is the installation of high intensity lighting that resulted in the decline in vandalism in Belleville.

(2)Belleville and Amburg might not be comparable at many aspects.

(3)The author fails to point out in what places do most vandalism at Amburg take place, thus we cannot evaluate if the police patrols are ineffective.

(4)The president ignores many other effective ways to combat crime.

(5)The president fails to consider the cost of installing high intensity lighting throughout Amburg and if we could afford it.

(6)Granted that installing such lighting could reduce vandalism, the necessity of installing the lighting all over Amburg is open to doubt.

(7)Granted that installing such lighting could reduce vandalism, we cannot guarantee that it would deter other types of crimes since vandalism is not the only type of crime in Amburg.

(8)The president unfairly assumes that the proposed actions would sufficiently guarantee revitalization of city neighborhoods.

注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。希望大家都能写出好作文。

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