GRE argument 200提纲分析汇总

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编辑点评: 提纲是作者构思谋篇的具体体现。便于作者有条理地安排材料、展开论证。提纲在GRE写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起,我们将对GRE argument进行分析,弄清写作思路,这样才能让GRE argument得高分。

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题目题材:医疗,经营

gre argument 200题目:

Statistics collected from dentists indicate that three times more(1,3) men than women faint while visiting the dentist(2). This evidence suggests that men are more likely to be distressed about having dental work done than women are. Thus, dentists who advertise to attract patients should target the male consumer (4) and emphasize both the effectiveness of their anesthetic techniques and the sensitivity of their staff to nervous or suffering patients (5, 6,7).

提纲:

(1)Without the base amount of male and female patients respectively, we cannot assess which group is more likely to be distressed.

(2)The author fails to describe the detailed circumstances when those patients faint, thus we could not evaluate the argument.

(3)The times of people faint are not a good indication of whether people are distressed.

(4)The author ignores the negative effects of advertisement which focusing on the male consumers.

(5)The author fails to consider what fraction of all patients are likely to be nervous or suffering, and how many consumers really care about their anesthetic techniques and sensitivity.

(6)The author ignores many important features of a dentist which could also attract patients.

(7)The proposed advertising techniques might have the opposite effect—by calling attention to the very sorts of images that cause distress and fainting.

注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。希望大家都能写出好作文。

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