GRE argument 178提纲分析汇总

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编辑点评: 提纲是作者构思谋篇的具体体现。便于作者有条理地安排材料、展开论证。提纲在GRE写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起,我们将对GRE argument进行分析,弄清写作思路,这样才能让GRE argument得高分。

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题目题材:生产,管理

gre argument 178题目:

The following appeared in the annual report from the president of the National Brush Company.

"In order to save money, we at the National Brush Company have decided to pay our employees for each brush they produce(1,6) instead of for the time they spend producing brushes. We believe that this policy will lead to the production of more and better(2) brushes(3,4), will allow us to reduce our staff size, and will enable the company factories to operate for fewer hours(5)—resulting in savings on electricity and security costs. These changes will ensure that the best workers keep their jobs and that the company will earn a profit(7) in the coming year."

提纲:

(1)The president fails to consider the cost and feasibility of paying workers for the number of brushes they produce.

(2)The president’s assumption that this policy will ensure better quality of brushes is open to question.

(3)Without any further study and report, the assumption that the new policy will increase workers’ productivity for sure is unwarranted.

(4)The president fails to illustrate that the productivity of our workers could be further improved.

(5)A smaller staff size and fewer operating hours would be contradictory to the president’s conclusion that the policy will necessarily guarantee more profits.

(6)There might be some negative effects of encouraging workers to produce more brushes per unit of time.

(7)The president ignores other factors that would contribute to the company’s profitability, thus implementing the policy alone might not sufficiently ensure earning a profit.

注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。希望大家都能写出好作文。

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