GRE argument 155提纲分析汇总

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编辑点评: 提纲是作者构思谋篇的具体体现。便于作者有条理地安排材料、展开论证。提纲在GRE写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起,我们将对GRE argument进行分析,弄清写作思路,这样才能让GRE argument得高分。

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题目题材:教育

gre argument 155题目:

The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a local newspaper.

"Too much emphasis is placed on the development of reading skills in elementary school. Many(2) students who are discouraged by the lonely activity of reading turn away from schoolwork merely because they are poor readers. But books recorded on audiocassette tape provide an important alternative for students at this crucial stage in their education(1), one the school board should not reject merely because of the expense involved(3). After all, many studies attest to the value(4) of allowing students to hear books read aloud; there is even evidence that students whose parents read to them(5) are even more likely to become able readers. Thus, hearing books on tape can only make students more eager to read and to learn. Therefore, the school board should encourage schools to buy books on tape and to use them in elementary education(6)."

提纲:

(1)No direct evidence could illustrate that hearing books on tape could indeed improve students’ reading ability.

(2)The author fails to provide the actual number of dropouts who leave school because of their poor reading ability, and the fraction of them in all students, thus we cannot evaluate if the problem is significant.

(3)The author fails to point out the actual cost of using books on tape, and if the school and parents could afford.

(4)The author fails to demonstrate what kind of value do those studies attest, thus we cannot evaluate the actual effect of books on tape on improving students’ reading ability.

(5)Hearing books on tape may not have the same effect as having parents read to students.

(6)The author ignores other better ways to resolve the problem.

注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。希望大家都能写出好作文。

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