GRE argument 147提纲分析汇总

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编辑点评: 提纲是作者构思谋篇的具体体现。便于作者有条理地安排材料、展开论证。提纲在GRE写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起,我们将对GRE argument进行分析,弄清写作思路,这样才能让GRE argument得高分。

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gre argument 147题目:

The following appeared in an editorial in a business magazine.

"Although the sales of Whirlwind video games have declined(1) over the past two years, a recent survey of video-game players suggests that this sales trend is about to be reversed. The survey asked video-game players what features they thought were most important in a video game(2). According to the survey, players prefer games that provide lifelike graphics, which require the most up-to-date computers(4). Whirlwind has just introduced several such games with an extensive advertising campaign directed at people 10 to 25 years old(5), the age-group most likely to play video games. It follows, then, that the sales of Whirlwind video games are likely to increase(6) dramatically in the next few months(3)."

提纲:

(1)The author fails to take into account other factors that might also lead to the decline in their sales of video games.

(2)Many other questions that are directly related to the conclusion are ignored by the author.

(3)The author fails to consider other features that may also influence the overall quality of a game.

(4)The author fails to analyze how many players have access to such most up-to-date computers.

(5)No evidence could indicate that players 10-25 years old will also prefer such kind of games.

(6)Sales of video games would be determined by many factors, thus the mere fact cited by the author could not ensure increase in our sales.

注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。希望大家都能写出好作文。

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