GRE argument 145提纲分析汇总

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编辑点评: 提纲是作者构思谋篇的具体体现。便于作者有条理地安排材料、展开论证。提纲在GRE写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起,我们将对GRE argument进行分析,弄清写作思路,这样才能让GRE argument得高分。

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题目题材:生命科学、保健

gre argument 145题目:

A new study collected data that shows that people who snore are more likely to gain weight than are people who do not snore. It is well known that many(1) people who snore also stop breathing frequently during the night for a few seconds, a condition called sleep apnea. The interruption of breathing wakes the person—often so briefly that the waking goes unnoticed—and can leave the person too tired(3) during the day to exercise(2,8). Anyone(4) who snores, therefore, should try to eat less(6) than the average person and to exercise more(5,7).

提纲:

(1)We do not know what fraction of people who snore actually suffer from sleep apnea.

(2)People who suffer from sleep apnea may actually exercise during the day although they are tired.

(3)The author fails to illustrate the actual effect of sleep apnea, thus the assumption that people who suffer from it will necessarily be tired is unwarranted.

(4)The assumption that all people who snore will necessarily eat more and exercise less than normal is unwarranted.

(5)The author’s assumption that people who snore should exercise more is contradictory to the assumption that those people are too tired to exercise.

(6)No evidence could illustrate that eating less could effectively result in reducing weight.

(7)The author ignores many other factors that would contribute to snore and gaining weight.

(8)The author fails to consider the possibility that obesity could reversely result in people snore.

注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。希望大家都能写出好作文。

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