GRE argument 140提纲分析汇总

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编辑点评: 提纲是作者构思谋篇的具体体现。便于作者有条理地安排材料、展开论证。提纲在GRE写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起,我们将对GRE argument进行分析,弄清写作思路,这样才能让GRE argument得高分。

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gre argument 140题目:

The following appeared in a report of the Committee on Faculty Promotions and Salaries at Elm City University.

"During her seventeen years as a professor of botany, Professor Thomas has proved herself to be well worth her annual salary of $50,000. Her classes are among the largest at the university(1), demonstrating her popularity among students. Moreover, the money she has brought to the university in research grants(2) has exceeded her salary in each of the last two years(3). Therefore, in consideration of Professor Thomas' demonstrated teaching and research abilities, we recommend that she receive a $10,000 raise and a promotion to Department Chairperson(4); without such a raise and promotion(7), we fear that Professor Thomas will leave Elm City University for another college(5,6,8)."

提纲:

(1)The size of the classes could hardly be a good indication of the popularity of a professor among students.

(2)The amount of research grants brought by a professor could not indicate the research abilities of that professor.

(3)The committee simply assumes that research grants brought by Prof. Thomas will continue to exceed her salary in the future.

(4)Granted that Prof. Thomas has demonstrated excellent teaching and research abilities, we cannot guarantee that she will also be highly competent as a chairperson.

(5)The committee fails to demonstrate that Prof. Thomas has other choices currently, and that she is willing to teach at another university.

(6)The committee unfairly assumes that Prof. Thomas will leave for sure if we do not provide such a raise and promotion.

(7)Other measures could also be used to keep Prof. Thomas staying at Elm City University.

(8)The committee fails to illustrate that the proposed promotion and salary raise are sufficiently attractive for Prof. Thomas.

注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。希望大家都能写出好作文。

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