GRE argument 139提纲分析汇总

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编辑点评: 提纲是作者构思谋篇的具体体现。便于作者有条理地安排材料、展开论证。提纲在GRE写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起,我们将对GRE argument进行分析,弄清写作思路,这样才能让GRE argument得高分。

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题目题材:教育

gre argument 139题目:

The following appeared in the editorial section of an educational publication.

"One study at Lee University(2) found that first-semester grades of teenage students who had always attended public, tax-supported schools were slightly lower than the grades of students who had received some home schooling instruction by parents at home(1,3), although the grade differences disappeared in the second semester(4). These results suggest that home schooling is the best(5) way to educate teenage children. Therefore, instead of spending more money on public education, the government should provide financial incentives so that home schooling is an option for more parents(6). After all, children schooled at home receive more attention, since they are taught by the best possible teacher: a parent who has a high stake in educating them well(7)."

提纲:

(1)The author fails to consider other differences between the two groups of students.

(2)The result of the study at one university might not be representative of all teenage students.

(3)No direct evidence is provided to show that it is the home schooling that resulted in the higher grades of students who received it.

(4)The fact that the grade differences disappeared in the second semester might well illustrate that home schooling was not responsible for the higher grades.

(5)The author ignores other better ways to educate teenage children.

(6)The author assumes without any guarantee that the incentives will be effective and most parents are willing to respond to the policy.

(7)The author fails to consider if some parents are capable of being effective tutors, merely more attention does not equal better education.

注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

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