GRE argument 130提纲分析汇总

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编辑点评: 提纲是作者构思谋篇的具体体现。便于作者有条理地安排材料、展开论证。提纲在GRE写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起,我们将对GRE argument进行分析,弄清写作思路,这样才能让GRE argument得高分。

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题目题材:家庭生活

gre argument 130题目:

The following appeared in the annual report of a chain of stores that sell supplies for do-it-yourself home improvements.

"Current reports indicate that sales of new homes nationwide declined by 9 percent during the past year, while sales of existing homes increased by 16 percent(1,2). Thus we can expect that the percentage of homeowners who will be making repairs or improvements to their homes(3) will also increase. In addition, people who buy existing homes will have more money left over(4) after the purchase to spend on home improvements. Finally, people who buy existing homes are more likely to make improvements themselves(5), as opposed to paying someone else. These factors combined indicate we can expect an increasing demand for products in all(6) our stores(7) nationwide, thus increasing our profits in the coming year(8)."

提纲:

(1)The author simply assumes that the trends of sales of homes will continue in the coming year.

(2)The author fails to inform us the total amount of new homes and existing homes respectively, maybe the increase in the sales of existing homes is insignificant.

(3)The author’s assumption that most existing homes sold last year need repairs or improvements, and that most homeowners of such homes are willing to make repairs and improvements is open to doubt..

(4)The author fails to provide the prices of new homes and existing homes, and the financial status of people who buy the two kinds of homes, thus the assumption that people who buy existing homes will have more spare money is unwarranted.

(5)No evidence could imply that people who buy existing homes are necessarily interested in DIY works.

(6)The argument fails to rule out the possibility that the demand for DIY products will not increase in some regions.

(7)The evidence cited above, if true, does not indicate that homeowners will choose products of the author’s stores.

(8)The profits of the stores would be influenced by many factors, thus the conclusion that their profits will necessarily increase is doubtful.

注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。希望大家都能写出好作文。

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