GRE argument 129提纲分析汇总

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编辑点评: 提纲是作者构思谋篇的具体体现。便于作者有条理地安排材料、展开论证。提纲在GRE写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起,我们将对GRE argument进行分析,弄清写作思路,这样才能让GRE argument得高分。

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GRE argument 129题目:

The following appeared in the Sherwood Times newspaper.

"A recent study reported that pet owners have longer, healthier lives on average than do people who own no pets(1,2). Specifically, dog owners tend to have a lower incidence of heart disease. In light of these findings, Sherwood Hospital should form a partnership with Sherwood Animal Shelter to institute an 'adopt-a-dog' program(3,5). The program would encourage dog ownership for patients recovering from heart disease(4,7), which will help reduce medical costs(6) by reducing the number of these patients needing ongoing treatment. In addition, the publicity about the program will encourage more people(9) to adopt pets(8) from the shelter, which will reduce the risk of heart disease in the general population(10)."

提纲:

(1)No causal relationship between owning pets and healthier lives of the pet owners is established.

(2)There may be other differences between people who own pets and those who do not.

(3)Pets could cause other health problems.

(4)The author fails to illustrate that owning a dog would have the same positive effects on recovery of heart disease as it has on preventing heart disease.

(5)Some patients may not be willing to adopt a dog, or capable of owning dogs, or could afford raising a dog.

(6)The patients may suffer form other health problems, thus their medical expenses would not necessarily decrease even if owning a dog could indeed lower the risk of heart disease.

(7)The author unfairly assumes that at least a significant number of people who adopt pets from the shelter will have risks of heart disease.

(8)The author fails to illustrate that adopting other pets would have the same effect on preventing heart disease as owning a dog has.

(9)The author hastily assumes that the proposed program would be appealing to the general public.

(10)Since the risk of heart disease in the general population might be influenced by many factors, implementing the program alone may not sufficiently reduce the risk.

注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。希望大家都能写出好作文。

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