GRE argument 110提纲分析汇总

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编辑点评: 提纲是作者构思谋篇的具体体现。便于作者有条理地安排材料、展开论证。提纲在GRE写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起,我们将对GRE argument进行分析,弄清写作思路,这样才能让GRE argument得高分。

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题目题材:学校建设

gre argument 110题目:

The following appeared in a memo from the Principal of Sherwood Junior High School.

"It appears that the lighting in Sherwood High's classrooms, which have large windows but minimal overhead light sources, is impairing student academic performance and teacher morale. Records show that during December and January, the two months with the fewest hours of daylight(1), attendance rates fall, average daily class participation drops, and grades decline(2). Teacher resignations are also highest during these months. According to a study of Tundra Vocational School, which experiences entire seasons with little daylight, students' grade point averages increased(3) when Day Glow light bulbs, which mimic sunlight, were installed in classrooms. This study suggests that Sherwood can improve students' academic performance and teachers' morale by using Day Glow light bulbs(5) in winter(4)."

提纲:

(1)No evidence is provided to show that sunlight in December and January is insufficient for students’ academic study at Sherwood.

(2)The Principal fails to prove that it is the short of lighting in our classrooms that resulted in the lower attendance rates, daily class participation and grades.

(3)Other factors may explain the increase in students’ grade point averages at Tundra Vocational School.

(4)There may be many other differences between Tundra Vocational School and Sherwood Junior High School.

(5)The Principal ignores other possible ways to improve lighting besides using Day Glow light bulbs.

注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

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