GRE argument 63提纲分析汇总

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编辑点评: 很多参加GRE的考生在做GRE写作的时候都没有写提纲的习惯,这是非常不好的。提纲在GRE写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起,我们将对GRE argument进行分析,弄清写作思路,这样才能让GRE argument得高分。

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题目题材:社会

gre argument 63题目:

When Stanley Park first opened, it was the largest, most heavily used park in town. It is still the largest park, but it is no longer heavily used. Video cameras mounted in the park's parking lots last month(2) revealed the park's drop in popularity: the recordings showed an average of only 50 cars per day(1,3). In contrast, tiny Carlton Park in the heart of the business district is visited by more than 150 people on a typical weekday(4). An obvious difference is that Carlton Park, unlike Stanley Park, provides ample seating(5). Thus, if Stanley Park is ever to be as popular with our citizens as is Carlton Park, the town will obviously need to provide more benches, thereby converting some of the unused open areas into spaces suitable for socializing(6).

提纲:

(1)The number of cars at the park’s parking lots may not be a good indication of the park’s popularity.

(2)There may be some special reasons last month that resulted in the dropped popularity of Stanley Park.

(3)The author does not provide information concerning the number of visitors at Stanley before the cameras were mounted.

(4)Many other differences may render the two parks not comparable.

(5)The author fails to convince us that it is the ample seating that makes Carlton so popular.

(6)The author fails to consider the possible negative effects of converting unused open areas into public social spaces.

注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。

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