美国教育考试服务中心公布的Issue主题的范文中，包含了不同的分数，大家需要仔细研读的是“4-6”分作文，对于一些低分作文，大家可以看看官方对它们的评价，分析其分数低的原因。
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"Both the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them have created modern civilizations in which loneliness is ever increasing."
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Technology, broadly defined as the use of tools, has a long history.
Ever since Erg the caveman first conked an animal with a rock, people have been using technology.
For thousands of years, the use of tools allowed people to move ever closer together.
Because fields could be cultivated and the technology to store food existed, people would live in cities rather than in small nomadic tribes.
Only very lately have Erg's descendants come to question the benefits of technology.
The Industrial Revolution introduced and spread technologies that mechanized many tasks.
As a result of the drive toward more efficient production and distribution (so the ever larger cities would be supported), people began to act as cogs in the technological machine.
Clothing was no longer produced by groups of women sewing and gossiping together, but by down-trodden automation's operating machinery in grim factories.
The benefits of the new technology of today, computers and the internet, are particularly ambiguous.
They have made work ever more efficient and knit the world together in a web of information and phone lines.
Some visionaries speak of a world in which Erg need not check in to his office; he can just dial in from home.
He won't need to go to a bar to pick up women because there are all those chat rooms.
Hungry?
Erg orders his groceries from an online delivery service.
Bored?
Download a new game.
And yet...
Many people, myself included, are a little queasy about that vision.
Erg may be doing work, but is it real work?
Are his online friends real friends?
Does anything count in a spiritual way if it's just digital?
高分的作文大家要像它们学习，低分的作文大家要勤于分析原因。
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