再来看一个流程图:
The diagram below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant.
根据题干内容,这是关于一个生命周期的循环,而且图上也标有1-4的数字,所以前面三个难点几乎荡然无存了,只留下最后一个难题:如何使用合适的动词把四个步骤有条理、有文采地描述出来。
我们看一下例文:
First of all, a moth lays a multitude of eggs on mulberry leaves. After 10 days, the eggs successfully hatch into silkworm larvae that feed on the leaves. Then, 4 to 6 weeks later the larvae are found to be surrounding themselves with silk threads. This process continues for 3 to 8 days until they are completely covered within a cocoon. Lastly, an adult moth emerges from the cocoon after another 16 days and is again responsible for egg reproduction, launching the life cycle of the silkworm into a new round.
可以注意到这里不仅有单一的动词,也有动词词组(比如:feed on);既有动词的主动语态,也出现了一些被动态(比如:be found to, be covered within)。另外,反身动词surround oneself with … 以及一些副词again, completely的运用也非常娴熟。除了动词之外,形容词词组(be responsible for)和分词(launching … into …)的使用也为文章增加了极大的语法和词汇的多样性。而在四个步骤之间的时间过渡词,运用得也同样精彩,可以说是没有重复的现象。
看了之后,烤鸭们还要多多的进行训练,不出时日,一定能够完胜雅思流程图的写作。
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