1. There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
这个句子包含了2层完整的意思“There are many ways”以及“we get to know the outside world”，简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。
改为：There are many ways for us to get to know the outside world.或者There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world.
措辞毛病（troubles in diction）
1. The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
显然，考生把“obstacles”“障碍物”当做“物质”来使用了，另外，“the increasing use”（不断增加的使用）应该改为“abusive use”(滥用)。
改为：The abusive use of chemical substance in agriculture also leads to pollution.
1. In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him.
本句中的“In spite of the fact that he is lazy”是同位语从句，按照我们上面说的能用词组不用从句，
改为：In spite of his laziness, I like him.
2. For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the things they need.
改为：Diligent, caring people use money only to buy things they need.
1. The fresh water, it is the most important things in the world.
“the fresh water”与逗号后的it不连贯，it与things在数方面不一致。
改为：The fresh water is the most important thing in the world.
1. Today money to everyone is very importance, our’s cloths, live, eat, go etc.
改为：Today money to everyone is very important, for example, our eating, clothing, living, going ,etc.
Writing task 1 (Cambridge 1- page 51):
The diagram shows the process of collecting information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts in Australia Bureau of Meteorology. It can be clearly seen that information goes through three main stages until it can be broadcast. These stages are incoming information, analysis and forecasting, preparing the broadcast and finally, broadcast.
As it is shown in the diagram, first, information is gathered via satellite, radar, and drifting buoy. The information from satellite is transmitted to radar. Satellite, itself, takes photos. All the information provided by these three tools are integrated into satellite photos, radar screen, and synoptic charts. Then, they are analyzed and forecast. This information is sent to computers in order to prepare the broadcast. Finally, up-to-date information is broadcast via TV, radio, and recorded announcement.
In conclusion, the diagram shows that there are various stages in preparing and
broadcast of latest news on the weather and that radar has a fundamental role in gathering data. Also, the most comprehensive information is obtained from synoptic charts.