2014年5月24日雅思写作解析

所属专题:雅思考试  来源:杭州新东方考神计划    要点:杭州新东方考神计划  
编辑点评: 杭州新东方考神计划是13年6月份新东方集团在杭州推出的一个雅思考试计划。每次雅思考试都会有老师去参加(杭州地区),并在当天发布最新回忆,四科解析也会最晚在第二天中午发布。本文为2014年5月24日雅思写作解析。

杭州新东方考神计划

杭州新东方考神计划是13年6月份新东方集团在杭州推出的一个雅思考试计划。每次雅思考试都会有老师去参加(杭州地区),并在当天发布最新回忆,四科解析也会最晚在第二天中午发布。

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Task 1 分析

表格。5种运动方式在三个年份的情况比较。时间均是过去的。注意动态句式的运用,同时,五种运动方式之间的横向比较要重点突出。

考情分析和预测:

今年表格第3次出现,上一次出现时在2月22日。今年到目前为止线图出现4次,柱图6次,表格3次,饼1次(1月份),流程和地图在五月份均已出现一次,所以六月份的考试关注重点应为饼图。

Task2分析:

原题重现:
Many young people leave school with a negative attitude. What are the reasons? How can we encourage young people to study?

考情分析:

本次考题是旧题,在2010年5月29号已经出现过。 教育类一直是雅思大作文的最常见题卡,今年也不例外。其中和青少年教育相关的题目中,报告类的并不少见,常见的有青少年犯罪,青少年心理问题,年轻人失业率高等话题。这次以报告类形式出现也在意料之中,因为报告类作文今年只在1、3月份分别出现过一次,其中3月份那次还是混合类。

近年来类似的题目还有:
2012.9.22 In some countries, Young people are not only richer but also safer and healthier than ever before. However, they are less happy. Reasons and solutions

6月考试预测:

今年尚未考到过crime, animal,aging等话题,同时Technology, environment, culture等话题出得不多,需要适当准备。接下来出现议论文的概率会比较高。

审题要点:

导致青少年负面情绪重的原因:
1. 教育体系过于应试,不关注孩子本身的兴趣和情商培养;
2. 社会的不公平和竞争的激烈,让青少年有了“读书无用论”。

鼓励青年们学习可采取的措施:
1. 教育的重心不是纯粹的知识和技能的传授,而应当是对兴趣的激发、学习习惯的培养和辩证思维的养成。
2. 更加公正开明的竞争机制。

范文展示(仅供参考):

Recently, a soaring proportion of students have dropped out of the school and many more have made complaints about the current education and society. In this essay, I aim to analyze this phenomenon and recommend some feasible solutions.

The issue is undoubtedly not caused in a few days. So test-oriented the current education system has been for so long that both schools and parents seem to prioritize students’ academic performance as opposed to their integrative competence. Consequently, grueling schedules are always made for them. To make it worse, most of them are actually forced to study regardless of what their intrinsic interests are.

Another pathetic truth is that even though many young minds have made strenuous and persistent efforts for nearly two decades or even longer, not a few still fail to find a job worthy of their endeavor. Some of them probably will owe this to the unfairness of the job market and thus draw the conclusion that learning is useless.

To address the issue definitely requires long-term and collaborative efforts. The first and foremost is, in my eyes, to shift the focus of education from sheer knowledge instruction and skills training to stimulating their interests, cultivating good learning habits and developing original and critical way of thinking. Important as knowledge and skills may be, no matter how much we learn, if we learn it unwillingly, the learning itself remains meaningless.

On the other hand, it is essential that a fairer competitive mechanism be established to ensure that great efforts made, one can be rewarded accordingly.

To sum up, in my opinion, in order to dispel the negative influence on young people exerted by the conventionally knowledge-based education and unfair society, substantial changes have to be made, among which self-motivated learning is vital.

词汇拓展:

drop out 辍学
test-oriented education应试教育
prioritize 把...放在首位
academic performance 学习成绩,学术表现
make strenuous and persistent efforts 付出不懈的努力
stimulate interests 激发他们的兴趣
cultivate good learning habits 培养良好的学习习惯
develop original and critical way of thinking 养成独立的辩证的思维方式
competitive mechanism 竞争机制
self-motivated learning 自我激励的学习

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