2013年3月23日雅思写作考试
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大作文：Technological progress in the past century has its negative effect, despite its remarkable contribution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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contribution |
Negative effects |
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1 machinery, productivity 2 immediate communication 3 medical advance 4 long distance transport 5 entertainment and recreation |
1 environment 2 health 3 overpopulation |
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题目 |
Scientific progress influences our daily life greatly. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? |
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开头段 |
Scientific progress has enormous impact on our life. For instance, mobile phones shorten the distance among friends and families; televisions entertain our leisure time; trains and planes take us around the world. Scientific progress seems to make life simpler and more comfortable. However, if we look around more carefully, perhaps we will find that progress is not always that good. |
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中间段1 |
Technology, such as Internet, provides people with the access to shopping or managing private business rather than wasting too much time commuting. |
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中间段2 |
Globalization is intensified because of the development of communication, leading to the globalization of work. As a matter of fact, people are forced to spend more time working. |
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结尾段 |
From what has been discussed, one understands that the development of technology has tremendous impacts on people’s daily lives, although the side effects actually deserve more attention. Providing we cannot handle the negatives, the decent life will not be ensured. |
It is undeniable that technological advancement has made an unprecedented change in our human life in the last century. Nonetheless, its destructive impact on our society has also to be recognized. （形式主语+被动句）
In the 20thcentury, some significant inventions including jet planes, TV, cars, computers and telephones have shaped our modern life fundamentally. Long distance transportation becomes easier and increasing international communication in many aspects such as trade, cultures and technology expands our activity sphere and broadens our horizons. Our life expectancy is longer than ever before thanks to medical progress and some fatal diseases such as heart disease and breast cancer can be cured. Boosted productivity in industry and agriculture by automation has solved famine in many regions and improved our living standard dramatically. TV and the internet provide entertainments and information as well. （非谓语+对比句+并列句+被动句）
However, it has been widely realized that the benefits produced by technology do not come at no cost. The environment deterioration makes the earth less livable largely due to the overuse of fuel sources for energy production and traffic exhaust. Another contributor is the high efficiency of production which makes consumer goods so cheap that people throw away food or anything out of date or broken with little hesitation, but unfortunately it is this throw-away lifestyle that is responsible for the large amount of waste and meanwhile escalates the commodity production in turn. Overpopulation, as one consequence of the improved medical condition and better material life, has savagely deprived animals and plants of their habitats, damaging the balance of the nature and eco-sustainability. In spite of the medical progress, the public health ironically is not getting enhanced and the reason for this is modern sedentary lifestyle which features the addiction to TV, the computer and the internet. （形式主语+非谓语+双重否定+对比句+定语从句+结果状语从句+并列句+强调句）
In conclusion, I personally assume that science and technology has changed our life in both positive and negative ways. While we enjoy more material affluence and convenience, we have to tolerate the contaminated environment and poor health. Maybe we should not be too optimistic about science and technology development. (宾语从句+对比句)
词汇拓展：
1. undeniable 不可否认的
2. technological advancement 科技进步
3. unprecedented 史无前例的
4. destructive 破坏性的
5. recognize 承认
6. jet plane 喷气式飞机
7. shape=influence 影响
8. fundamentally 根本上
9. expand = enlarge扩大
10. sphere 范围
11. life expectancy 平均寿命
12. medical progress 医学进步
13. fatal diseases 绝症
14. breast cancer 乳腺癌
15. cure 治愈
16. automation 机械化
17. famine 饥荒
18. optimistic 乐观的，pessimistic 悲观的
19. deterioration 恶化
20. traffic exhaust 汽车尾气
21. contributor 因素
22. high efficiency 高效
23. with little hesitation 不犹豫
24. unfortunately 不幸的是
25. escalate 加速
26. commodity 消费品
27. Overpopulation 人口过剩
28. consequence = result后果
29. savagely =疯狂地
30. deprived …of … 剥夺
31. habitat 栖息地
32. ironically 可笑的是
33. enhance= improve= increase 提高
34. sedentary lifestyle 宅居的生活方式
35. feature = characterize以…为特征
36. addiction 上瘾
37. material affluence 富裕
38. tolerate 忍受
39. contaminated environment 污浊的环境
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