2012年9月22日雅思写作考试
小作文：Two pie charts about five reasons why students choose a particular UK university
双饼图，有关学生选择就读某所英国大学的五个原因在两个不同年份所占百分比的情况。
写作小贴士:饼图分为数值类饼图(参见剑桥系列Book7Test4)和百分比类饼图(参见剑桥系列Book8Test2)，纵观以往考察的情况，百分比类饼图又占据了相当的比重，值得注意的是，本次所考察的双饼图跟书上的题目相比都有时间的变化，故为动态饼图，所以相对来说更容易些，在具体写作的过程中需要提醒大家注意的是：第一，注意文章整体的layout，introduction开门见山;body paragraph(s)抓住饼图的key features，适时making comparisons;结尾彰显出两组饼图的共性/相关性。第二，在body paragraph(s)和conclusion写作过程中，注意时态的正确运用(仔细观察饼图有无时态注解，若无时态注解，用一般现在时态进行解析即可)。第三，在中间部分写作时，注意饼图所特有词汇的呈现方式，for instance，“占据”和“百分比”的多样表达。
写作关键词推荐:
1-account for;
2-occupy;
3-take up;
4-be shared by;
5-a large proportion of;
6-a thumping majority;
7-per cent;
8-increase;
9-decrease;
10-in excess of;
11-in contrast;
12-drastic;
写作句型推荐：
1. XX covered comparatively a majority of….
2. This is comparatively low compared with….
3. The figures presently stand at….
4. The correlation between the two changed….
5. On the other hand, XX accounted for a small portion of XX, at XX.
6. Furthermore, the remaining XX was shared by XX.
7. However, the pattern seemed to be reverse.
8. XX, however, showed a different story.
大作文：
A类：In some countries children become richer, safer and healthier, but they are not happy. Why? What is the solution? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
点评：本题属于Report题型，与06年12月16日的题目虽然题型不同，但还是有共通之处的。原因：竞争带来学习和就业压力;电子科技使朋友间疏远;社会贫富差距拉大，流动性减少。解决：政府制定政策鼓励年轻人创业;同学朋友同事多组织文体活动;政府调节贫富差距，解决分配不公，增加社会流动性。
范文：
Children will be happy when their family environment is not confusing, and you may as well be sure that their happiness does not simply rely on being richer, safer and healthier. In some countries, children being spoiled one way or another do not appear to be as happy as they are thought to be, due mainly to their parents' wrong attitudes concerning respect and discipline. It is possible that you could make your child happier if you could remember to act like an adult and not a child, and also as a boss and not as a friend that you intend to be.
Naturally, father and mother are responsible for making a child as happy as possible by being a parent in the traditional sense of the word Too often you are inclined to pretend to be like a child to get your child to like you, which is no less than confusing to an immature mind. Chances are that you might be viewed as a child rather than a parent, not knowing that a child actually needs an adult Dad and Mom in the normal environment. By and by, your child will not respect you, and the lack of respect does not generate happiness because your child needs you to be a parent, not a child. At this point, a happy child is one who takes the advantage of normal parenting, far from playing a childish role. That means that while you must listen to your children and not to ignore them, you should never forget playing the role of a a kissing parent and a scolding parent on different occasions.
Likewise, a child is not happy if discipline is missing at home. You ought to act like a boss and tell your children when they do wrong and correct them, and even punish them if necessary, because this could help make a child happier at heart. It may be said that a happy child is one who is taught to distinguish what is the right thing to do and what is not. In other words, young children in particular need parents to have authority to run the family government properly, otherwise the situation might turn out to be confusing sometimes. These days, there are cases in which children seem to be in charge, as this can be seen in the way parents obey their children. Also, it is not uncommon nowadays that the parent-child relationship is apparently based on peer friendship rather than family discipline, thus allowing a child to feel like an "unhappy" commander-in-chief in the family.
As an adult and boss, both parents are supposed to understand that their children could be even happier if they are asked to follow the rules regarding respect and discipline. Of course, money, safety and health are always important to childhood happiness; nevertheless, a child should be treated strictly as a child without causing any confusion. For that matter, you cannot expect a very confused child to be very happy, can you?
G类：Some people think advertisement is a useful function for TV viewers, but others disagree. What's your opinion?
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