雅思写作真题和解析-2012.10.27

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2012年10月27日雅思写作考试

A类雅思写作

Task 1

图表类型

表格

作文题目

The table shows the proportion of young people who were employed in different sectors in 2005 and 2010. 原图见下表

写作指导

本题是动态表格,注意横纵比即可,横比交代总体就业率较高的专业(Social services, manufacturing,shops/restaurants/hotels),最低的专业是Agriculture和Transport. 纵比基于动态变化将专业分为上升和下降两组。由于都是过去时间,因此都采用一般过去时。表格中的数据是以数字形式出现,但是很明显,不管是从题目还是图片小标题中都有百分比的提示"proportion/percentage“,所以大家在书写正文的过程中一定要注意使用百分比的数据的描写。

第一段:改写题目

第二段:主要行业:Manufacturing, shops, restaurants and hotels, and social service。描述趋势。

第三段:次要行业:Agriculture, business, transport and the other。描述趋势。

第四段:结论

范文:

The data above illustrate the change in the proportion of young adults working in various sectors in a particular country from 2005 to 2010.

Manufacturing, shops, restaurants and hotels, and social service remained the major sectors for labor force employment in both 2005 and 2010. In 2005, most youngsters worked for these three sectors. To be specific, social service workers accounted for 34% of total young labors and the other two main industries evenly employed 20% in this age group. However, in 2010 smaller part of young people were recruited in the traditionally popular industries. While shops, restaurants and hotels attracted more young people at 32%, manufacturing and social services were losing their popularity, respectively hiring 14% and 22% of the young workforce.

Agriculture, business, transport and the other kept to be the minor sectors despite that the percentage of young employees increased moderately during these five years. The percentage of transport personnel declined from 5% in 2005 to 4% in 2010. In contrast, the figure for farm hands increased slightly from 5% to 8% during the same period. There was also an insignificant growth in other industry, from 8% to 10% in the same 5 years.

From the statistic, a labor flow can be seen from manufacturing and social service to farming, business and customer service.

同义词转换:

Employ= recruit =hire -Attract

Worker = employee = labor force = workforce = hands = personnel

Moderately = insignificantly = slightly

Increase = grow

Decrease = decline

shops, restaurants and hotels= customer service

agriculture = farming

sector = industry

类似真题

剑6 Test 2,但是项目更少,且无总量,因此难度更低。

Sector

2005

2010

Agriculture

5

8

Business

7

10

Manufacturing

21

14

Shops, restaurants & hotels

20

32

Social services

34

22

Transport

5

4

Other

8

10

Task 2

作文题目

Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?

题目翻译

广告不让人们成为不同的个人,因为它使得我们大家都想做同样的事情,并且看起来一样。你同意还是不同意?

话题分类

媒体与广告类

题型类别

同意与否

是否旧题

同2004年8月14日的题目

写作指导

题型没有to what extent,因此不能写成折中式。建议采取Disagree。如今做广告的厂商越来越多,广告的形式也多种多样,从电视广告,平面广告到网络广告,因此广告给消费者提供了更多的选择,因此并没有扼杀个性,相反增加了个性。其次,如今的消费者本身也越来越精明,他们具有辨别好坏的能力,广告并不能完全影响他们的购买决定。

参考范文

(来自互联网,分值在7.5左右

Today, many commercial advertisements can be seen everywhere, selling different kinds of products such as cosmetics, toys and clothes. Some people concern that the widespread of advertisements may result in the loss of individuality among people, as they tend to wear the same clothes and use the same makeup. From my perspective, I completely disagree with this viewpoint.

Admittedly, people from different walks of life have various consumption views. However, most people would budget their disposable income wisely instead of wasting all in a set of clothes without serious consideration. Therefore, despite the proliferation of the commercial advertisements for the same luxury product, people would still make decisions of buying or not according to their limited income.

Also, people are capable of distinguishing whether the clothes in the advertisement suit themselves or not. Being exposed in a sea of advertisements for long, people's immune systems towards advertisements have strengthened. Consequently, fewer people would be swayed by the gorgeous clothes in the advisements as they realize that most clothes on advertisements only suit for models but not for the average.

Furthermore, so many different advertisements are provided for people's option that it is fairly difficult to be the same with others. Take clothes for example. There are various styles, ranging from classical to modern, childish to mature, conservative to sexy. Therefore, people still could choose their favorite style to meet their demand.

To conclude, due to the multi-choice of advertisement and people's wise budget, people would not lost their individualities under the strong promotion of the same product in the advertisement.  (261 words)

G类雅思写作:

Task 1

信件类别

感谢信

要素回忆

写一封给机场经理的感谢信去感谢一位员工。形容当时发生了什么,这名员工如何帮助你,你要求经理为你做什么。

Task 2

考试题目

People can live longer nowadays. As a result, there are more old people than young people. Will this bring benefits or drawbacks?

题目翻译

如今人们可以活得更长了。因此,现在老年人的数量超过了年轻人。这带来了好处还是坏处?

话题类别与难度

社会类,老人常考话题之一,从老龄化着手即可,易写。

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