2012年12月1日雅思写作考试
A类：
Task1：柱状图 Regions of the world which buy food from other countries(import food) and those which sell food to other countries(export food). 坐标轴:三个exporters 四个importers,附注expoters: totally poulation is 600million, importers:5,503million。
点评：虽然图片“看上去”很新颖，但是其实只要大家认真以“剑桥”作为蓝本，应该不难发现剑7Test3图形和此类似。数据较少，细节描述尽量;分进、出口两段写。
Task2 ：More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home . Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
G类
Task2:More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?（越来越多公司允许员工在家办公。你认为这种做法是利还是弊?）
分析：老题。易写。可以从员工、公司和社会三个角度分别考虑。
对比：2009.12.12
Recently some people can work from home using modern technology. Some think this only benefits the workers, but not the employers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
这两道题基本一样，但要注意回应题目的方式不同。旧题中对雇主和雇员的影响分别讨论，对雇员的利益不必反驳;对雇主的影响有分歧，可以先让步题目的说法，即对雇主的劣势，然后再反驳，即对雇主也有益处。
而今天的题目可以把雇主雇员并在一起，优劣势分开说。论点和旧题没有区别。
解题思路：
第一段：背景和话题介绍，信息技术的发展，新的工作方式的产生。
第二段：积极面
1 节省交通时间,灵活支配时间，平衡家庭和工作的关系
2 节省开支，包括员工通勤开支，公司设施设备开支等
3 员工有更大自由，居住地点不受工作限制
第三段：消极面
1 缺少社交,生活枯燥;员工归属感和忠诚度降低，工作满意度可能会下降;
2 网络分散注意力;员工自律缺乏，家庭琐事增加，工作效率降低
3交流方式以远程为主，缺少面对面的沟通，劳工关系不良，合作难度增加
第四段：总结，这种工作方式适合某些工种，如按量计酬的工作，个人可以独立完成的工作;但不适合需要集体配合的工作，如服务业，基础教育
范文：
With the support of communication technologies, working at home is feasible and adopted as a flexible alternative by some companies in American and European countries. While this new trend has attracted many people including employees and employers as well, the negative impacts are looming.
At the first glance, telecommuting is very attractive for employees. They are relieved of exhausting commute to workplace at rush hours, and are allowed to arrange their timing at their convenience, thereby making work/life balance achievable. Physical presence at home especially means much for parents and carers of the elderly and the sick family members. Another obvious benefit is that home workers are not restricted to living in a particular city, such as Beijing China, where the environment can be heavily polluted or the housing prices abnormally high. Instead, they gain more freedom to choose their favorable lifestyle. On top of the increasing freedom and flexibility, both employees and employers benefit from teleworking in financial terms. Travel fare, fuel, parking, formal clothes are excluded and less expense occurs in office, such as rent, bills, incidental cost and so on.
However, teleworkers tend to complain about their isolation and depression due to lack of social life which plays a more significant role for human beings than we expect. The loss of sense of belonging can lead to psychological conditions, decreasing job satisfaction and loyalty to a company. Even though telecommuters do talk with their boss and coworkers, they talk on phone or on computer. Such way of interaction eliminates most of non-word information, such as body gesture, facial expression and eye contact, which directly leads to poor cooperation and industrial relation. In addition, working from home requires a high level of self-discipline and without this, working productivity would decrease due to the distraction of house chores and an abundance of internet resources.
To conclude, employees working at home may gain more flexibility, but they are more likely to find themselves losing connection with the society and cannot concentrate on work as they initially hope to. My view is that whether this working fashion functions well depends on the worker and the type of his or her job. If the worker can tune in well and the job can be accomplished individually, for instance, freelance writing or computer programming, then inconsecutive telework may be an optimal option. Otherwise, it should not be encouraged.
词汇拓展：
1. feasible 可行的
2. adopt 采纳
3. loom 出现
4. At the first glance 乍看起来
5. Telecommute 远程工作
6. relieved of 摆脱
7. at one’s convenience 为了某人的方便
8. be restricted to 局限于
9. abnormally 不正常地
10. flexibility 灵活性
11. in financial terms 在财政方面
12. exclude 不包括
13. incidental cost 杂费
14. isolation 疏远
15. depression 抑郁
16. sense of belonging 归属感
17. psychological conditions 心理问题
18. job satisfaction 工作满意度
19. loyalty 忠诚度
20. optimal option 最佳选择
21. industrial relation 劳工关系
22. self-discipline 自律
23. house chores 家庭琐事
24. an abundance of 大量的
25. initially 最初
26. working fashion 工作方式
27. tune in 调节
28. accomplish 完成
29. freelance writing 自由写作
30. computer programming 电脑编程
31. body gesture 身体姿态
32. facial expression 面部表情
33. eye contact 对视
34. inconsecutive 不连续的
写作指导：
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A类写作雅思作文高分写作模板:比较对立事物优缺点型作文 |
给出两个对立的事物或一个事物对立的两个方面，要求考生比较两者的优缺点并提供理由。 Some people believe AAA while others believe BBB. Give advantages and disadvantages of the two positions and explain which position you support. Give reasons for your answer. 1、AAA has improved the quality of our lives and played an important role in our daily life. The benefits AAA brings to us are far more than its disadvantages. However, it also creates some problems as well. On the postive side, AAA has enabled us to(1) 此处填入AAA 的优势之一。For instance, (2) 举例说明优势之一。Besides, (3)AAA 的优势之二。Nowadays, (4) 举例说明优势之二。In addition, (5)AAA 的优势之三。On the negative side, (6) 此处填入AAA 的劣势之一。For example, (7) 举例说明劣势之一。Also, (8)AAA 的劣势之二。Furthermore, (9)AAA 的劣势之三。All in all , we can’t live without AAA for the conveniences it brings to us, but we should also be aware of the negative effacts it creates on the modern life. 2、Some people believe AAA, but others claim BBB, while both have their advantages and disadvantages, they can be applied under different circumstances. For AAA,(1) 优势之一。However, in some cases, there are some negative effects. Most seriously, (2)AAA 的第一个劣势。Moreover,(3)AAA 的第二个劣势。Again,(4)AAA 的第三个劣势。On the other hand, (5)BBB 的优势。For example, (6) 举例说明BBB 的优势。In my opinion, the advantages of BBB are more than those of AAA, because BBB fits me in two ways:first,(7) 我支持BBB 的原因之一。Second,(8) 我支持BBB 的原因之二。 3、AAA may involve some problems in terms of its cost. However, there are stell many advantages of AAA. First of all, (1)AAA 的优势之一。Furthermore, (2)AAA 的优势之二。Finally, (3)AAA 的优势之三。Some people claim that (4) 人们反对AAA 的理由之一。I don’t think this is altogether true. In fact,(5) 举例说明. People also say that (6) 人们反对AAA 的另一个理由. It is true that such cases do exist in out life. However, these cases are uncommon and are the result of bad management. So the problems are in fact the problems of bad management, not AAA itself. In conclusion, there are more advantages than disadvantages of AAA. In most cases, therefore, the cost is justified. 4、There is a good side and a bad side to everything. Without exception, AAAhas brought us not only benefits but also risks. As we know that (1)AAA 的一个劣势。However, this does not mean AAA has no benefits. It is obvious that (2)AAA 的优势之一。Also, (3)AAA 的优势之二。A final point is that (4)AAA 的优势之三。For example, (5) 举例说明。Although there is a great deal of enthusiasm nowadays over the advantages of AAA, its disadvantages should not be neglected. Most importantly, (6)AAA 的劣势之一。Furthermore,(7)AAA 的劣势之二。Last but not least, (8)AAA 的劣势之三。However, we can avoid the negative effects with appropriate management such as (9) 列举控制AAA 负面影响的措施。So as shown above, I consider the advantages outweigh the disadvantaghes. |
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G类写作雅思作文高分写作模板:同意与否型作文 |
同意与否文体 There is no denying that the specific issue of sth./ 或接whether 从句has become controversial. However, in spite of those who are against/ for ..., I approve wholeheartedly of/ 或I strongly object to the idea that ...Those who hold negative/ positive attitude towards ... believe that ... may exert adverse/ significant effect on us. ... is always top of the list of their argument. For example,... (请用举例子的方法解释). Besides, those critics/ advocates also claim that ...（此处写第二个原因）for the reason that ...It is often the case that …(此处总结上段反方提出的几个观点)。But when it comes to ..., ..., and ...,(此处先总结写你所支持的几个理由)，an increasing number of people including me are convinced that ... For one thing, .... The evidence recently presented in research journals available to the public confirms that ...此处写调查结果，通过数字来证明自己所列举的理由1. Similarly,... should also deserve our special attention. In other words, ...(换种说法解释). If...not, ...(反过来在说一遍)。Last but not least, ... Obviously, it is hard for both sides to come to an agreement on this complicated issue, but I still commit to the notion that ...(再重申你的立场). |
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