【跟着沪江走,高分在招手】·【雅思备考·写作篇】
写作中确定了topic和task后,你就要构思作文的具体内容。
我们先来看一下与前两章相同的例子:
The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries.
Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions. |
构思是写作的重要部分。
想要在写作中拿高分,仅仅列出自己的观点是不够的,还要给出充分的解释。
Developing Focus Questions
这一题要你阐述青少年犯罪率上升的原因和解决方法。
你可以根据题目要求联想到几个focus questions,这对你的写作有很大帮助。
以下是这一题的focus questions:
Focus question 1: Why has teenage crime increased?
Focus question 2: What can be done about it?
对于这几个问题,你要给出自己的答案:
Why has teenage crime increased?
• Breakdown in the nuclear family(Nuclear family is a term used to define a family group consisting of a pair of adults and their children, as opposed to single-parent families.)
• Lack of things to do
What can be done about it?
• Government - Provide better support for families & stricter punishments
• Individuals – take responsibility
Extending and Supporting your Ideas
对于以上的问题,你要怎样阐述?
你可以就以上几点再问自己几个问题,如:
Why has there been a breakdown in the nuclear family?
What is the effect of this?
What is a good example of it?
回答了这几个问题,你的观点就完整了:
For example:
Why has there been a breakdown in the nuclear family?
- high divorce rates
What is the effect of this?
- no male role model; boys go astray & may commit crime
Planning
以上的内容就是你的作文的主要部分。
下面就是作文的结构:
Essay Plan Why has teenage crime increased? 1) Breakdown in the nuclear family - high divorce rates = no father as ‘role model’ – boys go astray, drugs & crime 2) Lack of things to do - e.g. TV has shown nothing to do – children see crime as entertainment What can be done about it? 1) Govt - Provide better support for families - e.g. more youth centres – guidance and activities, sport 2) Parents – take responsibility - provide loving environment, relative as role model |
有了这些后,就可以动笔了。大家来练一下吧。
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雅思写作:备考的六个关键点
“不抄”即不要抄袭范文;“不背”即不要死记硬背套句;“不译”即不要逐字逐句进行汉译英;“我思故我写”,即用自己的头脑去思考问题,用自己的语言去表述自己的观点。