16天搞定雅思写作Task 2- Day 6 Essay Writing Coherence

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Thesis statement 在整个文章中有着重要的作用,它是整个文章的灵魂,所以写好它,就等于文章写了一半出来,在写thesis statement 必须要做到以下几点:

1.一个好的论文必须有一个Point 和 purpose 

2.考虑一下你为什么要写这篇论文

3.你的文章为什么值得读者去读,他们能从中得到什么

4.你要说服读者去做什么,给他们带来什么启示

5.thesis statement 必须是一个完整的句子,去陈述这篇论文的结论和为什么会有这个conclusion.

下面是一些thesis statement 的例子,可以慢慢体会,从中学习. 

As global trade increases, many goods including those we use on a daily basis are produced in other countries and transported long distances.

Do the benefits of this trend *outweigh the drawbacks?

下面是thesis introduction,我们将thesis statement加粗:

Due to the increase in global trade, many of the goods that we consume every day are made in a different country and then transported over a long distance in order to reach us. In my opinion, this trend has more disadvantages than advantages. 

不同类型的问题对应不同形式的thesis statement:

1) 双论点

Some people think that young children should be allowed to do paid work, while others think that this should be illegal.

Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

例一:

Some people belive that it is acceptable for young children to undertake jobs that they are paid for, whereas others believe that this is wrong and should be illegal.This essay will discuss both sides of the issue.

例二:

At present, more and more young children are becoming involved in paid work. Whilst some people are of the opinion that this is an entirely acceptable practice, others believe that this is completely wrong and should be made illegal.

例三:

At present, more and more young children are becoming involved in paid work. Whilst some people are of the opinion that this is an entirely acceptable practice, I believe that this is completely wrong and should be made illegal.

2) 同意/不同意

Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

同意:

Alternative medicine is not new. It is accepted that it pre-dates conventional medicine and it is still used by many people all over the world. However, I strongly believe that this form of medicine does not work and is possibly a danger to those using it.

不同意:

Alternative medicine is not new. It is accepted that it pre-dates conventional medicine and it is still used by many people all over the world. I am unconvinced that it is dangerous, and feel that both alternative and conventional medicine can be useful.

不完全同意:

Alternative medicine is not new. It is accepted that it pre-dates conventional medicine and it is still used by many people all over the world. I agree that for certain conditions this type of medicine is ineffective and could even be dangerous, but for some illnesses it is a good alternative choice.

3) 其他类型

问题和解决方案:

Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.

Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

thesis statement加粗表示:

Many countries of the world are currently experiencing problems caused by rapidly growing populations in urban areas. Both governments and individuals have a duty to find ways to overcome these problems.

因果:

The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.

Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

thesis statement加粗表示:

Over the last ten years, Western societies have seen close to a 20% rise in the number of children who are overweight. This essay will discuss some reasons why this has occurred and examine the consequences of this worrying trend.

利弊:

In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

thesis statement加粗表示:

Traffic congestion in many cities around the world is severe. One possible solution to this problem is to impose heavy taxes on car drivers and use this money to make public transport better. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of such a measure.

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