16天搞定雅思写作Task 2- Day 8 Pronouns & Coherency

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Coherence 是雅思大作文的评分标准之一,即文章的连贯性。连贯的语言可以使文章读起来如行云流水,给人一气呵成之感。但是,在写作时,很多考生比较缺乏文章连贯的意识,或缺少使得语言表达连贯的方法,导致雅思大作文失分。今天小编就给各位雅思考生讲解一下如何增强段落内部的连贯性。

人称代词的使用:

I, you, he, she, it, we, they, one, them

Batteries are not bio-degradable, so people should not dispose of them in normal household waste.

指示代词的使用:

this, that, these, those

People dispose of batteries in their normal household waste. This causes environmental damage.

我们通过下面的范文来介绍代词的用法。

用红色来标识代词,绿色标识所指代的部分。

Animal Rights Essay

Some people believe that animals should be treated in the same way humans are and have similar rights, whereas others think that it is more important to use them (animals) as we desire for food and medical research. This essay will discuss both points of view.

With regard to the exploitation of animals, people believe it is acceptable for several reasons. Firstly, they (people) think that humans are the most important beings on the planet, and everything must be done to ensure human survival. If this (ensuring human survival) means experimenting on animals so that we (humans)can fight and find cures for diseases, 

then this (experimenting on animals) takes priority over animal suffering. Furthermore, it is believed by some that animals do not feel pain or loss as humans do, so if we (humans) have to kill animals for food or other uses, then this (killing animals for food or other uses) is morally acceptable.

However, I do not believe these arguments (the previous arguments - though this is made clear by the noun repeated after it in this case) stand up to scrutiny. To begin, it has been shown on numerous occasions by secret filming in laboratories via animal rights groups that animals feel as much pain as humans do, and they (animals) suffer when they (animals) are kept in cages for long periods. In addition, a substantial amount of animal research is done for cosmetics, not to find cures for diseases, so this (animal research for cosmetics) is unnecessary. Finally, it has also been proven that humans can get all the nutrients and vitamins that they(humans) need from green vegetables and fruit. Therefore, again, having to kill animals for food is not an adequate argument.

To sum up, although some people argue killing animals for research and food is ethical, I would argue there is sufficient evidence to demonstrate that this (the arguments that killing animals for research and food is ethical) is not the case, and, therefore, steps must be taken to improve the rights of animals.

Exercise 

Preserving certain old buildings is important for several reasons. Firstly,(1) _____________ structures provide an insight into the history of our countries, showing us how people many centuries ago lived their lives. Without() _____________ ,(1) _____________ could only learn by books, and it would undoubtedly be sad if(4) _____________ became the only way to see(5) _____________. Many of (6) _____________ buildings are also very beautiful. Take for example the many religious buildings such as churches and temples that(7) _____________ see around the world. Not only (8) _____________ , but on a more practical level, many of(9) _____________ buildings provide important income to a country as many tourists visit(10) _____________ .

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