2017年12月9日雅思写作大作文原创范文

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编辑点评: 给大家带来2017年12月9日雅思写作大作文范文之社会类话题:有关城乡差距的影响及问题解决。对于本题中城乡差异导致的问题和解决方面考生应该不难想出,词汇和短语方面也主要是关于社会服务以及经济发展。总体来说,本题难度系数并不是很大。范文来自小站原创。

带来2017年12月9日雅思写作真题大作文范文,社会类话题,题目是:A rise in the standard of living in a country seems to only benefit cities than rural areas. What problems might this difference cause? How might the problems be reduced?

1.范文解析
范文解析 解析:本文属于社会生活类话题。其文体为说明文。考生在布局篇章结构时,可以对应问题确定主体段的内容。对于本题中城乡差异导致的问题和解决方面考生应该不难想出,词汇和短语方面也主要是关于社会服务以及经济发展。总体来说,本题难度系数并不是很大。

2.原创范文
In the course of national economic progress, the imbalanced development between urban and rural areas has become a big concern for the authority, as it may give rise to a series of more pressing issues, which I would illustrate as follows.
Among those problems, the explosion of population in megacities is an inevitable one. Apparently, the sound public facilities and adequate educational resources attract a large quantity of people to flood into cities. Statistics show that in 2006, the total of residents in Shanghai ( a metropolis in China) was about 24. 20 million, of which approximately 40% of them were non-natives. Obviously, under such circumstance soaring house price and the heavy burden on traffic system are deemed as the consequent troubles. Most working class can hardly afford a private home or an apartment and traffic congestion is so common in every rush hour, demonstrating the urban infrastructure virtually cannot satisfy the demands of growing population.
What’s worse, this urban-rural gap may contribute to a vicious circle. As more locals swarm into large cities, the shrinkage of labour force in the countryside is worse, being an obstacle on the way to economic success. In consequence, the slow-paced rural economy renders the gap widens further.
In an attempt to diminish the gap, effective measures are supposed to be adopted and the first step is that the state should allocate more budget for the public service such as medical insurance, education as well as public transport in rural areas. Furthermore, the leading industries in countryside should be supported by government. For example, specific talents and high technology can be introduced to stimulate the agricultural development; historical experts can be hired to restore local cultural heritage so as to boost tourism industry. Only when public facilities were upgraded and local economy thrives, can people work and live in their hometown and the disparity between the city and countryside can be narrowed.(319 words)
3.文章结构
paragraph 1 :结合时代背景引入话题。
paragraph 2: 论述城乡差距导致的问题1(1.大量人口涌入城市以及其引发的问题)。
paragraph 3: 论述城乡差距导致的问题2(2.恶性循环)。
paragraph 4: 提出解决方法并总结。
4.高分结构
In the course of, … has become a big concern for… 在..的过程中,…已经成为了一个很大的问题
Only when, can… 只有当…的时候,…可以
5.高分话题表达
the imbalanced development between… and… …和…之间的发展不平衡
give rise to… 引起
the explosion of population 人口的爆炸
megacity 大城市
inevitable 不可避免的
sound public facilities 完善的公共设施
adequate educational resources 充足的教育资源
flood into cities 涌入城市
non-natives 外乡人
soaring house price 激增的房价
heavy burden on traffic system 交通及通的重担
consequent 随之发生的
working class 工薪阶层
traffic congestion 交通阻塞
rush hour 高峰期
urban infrastructure 城市基础设施
urban-rural gap 城乡差距
a vicious circle 一个恶性循环
swarm into 涌入
the shrinkage of …的收缩
an obstacle on the way to economic success 经济发展道路上的障碍
slow-paced rural economy 缓慢发展的乡村经济
diminish the gap 缩小差距
specific talents 专门的人才
stimulate the agricultural development 刺激农业发展
cultural heritage 文化遗产
boost tourism industry 促进旅游业
the disparity between… and … …和…的差距
 

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