2013年4月6日雅思写作考试
小作文:The line chart below shows the number of immigrants in USA, Canada and Australia.线图,1990-2001年期间美国、加拿大、澳大利亚移民数量比较。
大作文:100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?(原题20090521)
点评:
题目 |
Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed? |
开头段 |
How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development”cannot be regarded as real progress. |
中间段1 |
回答第一问:人类在哪些领域取得了进步?1. 众所周知,几个世纪以来,人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。 |
中间段2 |
回答第二问:哪些领域没有取得发展?1. 污染,全球变暖,物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题,它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。 |
结尾段 |
To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue. |