托福写作:标准美语让你大获全胜

所属专题:托福写作备考全集合  来源:    要点:托福写作  
编辑点评: 相信对大多数想要参加托福考试的同学来说,作文是一个老大难问题,那么福利来啦,跟着小编一起来看看有没有什么秘籍能提升你的托福写作水平吧。

托福写作有时很容易,短时间内可以掌握多个句型。但托福写作有时也很难,难点在于怎样用地道美语表达?在此考生们平时需要多多练习,并通过不断地改进把你写作时可能常说的话由Chinglish改成地道的English。

下面小编为大家准备了一些可以借鉴的标准美语,希望对大家有所帮助。

句子:

1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

2. For example, you work in a big factory.

改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

6. Their brain is still very young.

改进: They are still immature.

7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

以上是考生们在托福写作中经常出现的中国式英语经过修改后的地道英语的对比,希望大家能从中找出不同了解地道英语语法及词汇的使用习惯,掌握后可以更好地运用到你的托福写作中吧。 

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