新托福高分作文范例41

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Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I agree that school should ask students evalute their teachers. There are three reasons:

The first, the educatinon is a activity that communicate each other. The information that students evaluate is given to their teacher. The teacher can improve their education skill by this information. If there are no evaluated information by student, the education activity become unilateral activity. The teacher spread their information to students, but the students' informations reflects back to teacher are very few. The evaluation can help teacher improve the their skill from time to time.

The second, the evaluation is favor to school management. The management of school evaluate the education of teacher by sudents' evaluation. The managemet may prize the good teacher and criticize the bad, and lay the dis disquligicational teacher.

Finally, the evaluation is in favor to protect rights of students and parents. Students and parents are consumers, they hope that their children will receive good education certainly,they should protect their rights for themselves. When they find the educational skill of the teacher is bad, they may have school changed the teacher immmedietly.

In a word, I agree this point that students evaluate their teacher.

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