常远新托福写作真经----2012年10月19日北美真题及范文

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新托福独立写作:2012年10月19日北美真题及范文

Task 2: Writing Based on Knowledge and Experience

Directions: You have 30 minutes to plan and complete your essay.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Young people today would like to give more time and energy to improving theworldnow than in the past.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

思路拓展和标准范文

Introduction

思路拓展让步式开头,引出中心论点:如今的年轻人对世界做出的贡献更为重要→延伸论点:年轻人具备什么样的条件

中心论点

Every generation of young people has had its champions(支持者)for improving living conditions, and making the worldaround them a better place; however, young people todayare playing more crucial roles in making great contribution andbringing real evolution to the world.

延伸论点

Young people now have the time, the inclination(意向), themeans and the education to help their communitiesthroughoutthe world.

Essay Body

Paragraph 1

思路拓展本段论点:现在的年轻人通过先进的技术更多地融入世界→解释中心论点,层层递进→举例→总结

本段论点

First, young people now are actively getting involved inwhat goes on around them and contribute more to the worldbecause of advances in technology.

解释论点

When browsing any form of web media or online socialnetworks, it’s easy to see how young people have beengetting more involved in social causes and exchanging theirideas more freely than in the past.

大部分考生表达“如果上网浏览就不难发现……”时,往往会用if you surf online, you would… 这种“地球人都知道”的表达方式,老外会怎样表达?请参考本句。

举例

For example, social media such as Facebook has changedhow we meet and stay in touch with people by providing aplatform to discover people who share the same interests. Anda Twitter search will likely turn up other people talking aboutthe same subject as you.

结论

By these new means, it is easier for young people today togaininsight into domestic and international affairs, share their ideas,encourage each other, as well as organize activities and spreadtheir messages to bring about changes in the world.

Paragraph 2

 

思路拓展本段论点:世界各地越来越多的年轻人为保护环境和野生动物而奋战→解释论点→举例→总结:现在的很多年轻人在为这个世界更美好而奉献力量

本段论点

Furthermore, more and more young people today are fightingfor environmental and wild animal preservation all over theworld.

解释论点

We can see them sacrificing their time to help protect ourenvironment via media such as Discovery Channel.

举例

 

I once heard about a young woman environmentalist wholived alone on an island in the East Indian Ocean for overfive years, conducting her research on the negative impact ofenvironmental changes on sea animals and thus calling forimmediate action from the government.

结论

This is just one example that shows how youth are indeedgiving their time and energy to improve the world.

Conclusion

 

思路拓展再次阐明中心论点→总结:很多年轻人在积极参与社会活动

重申中心论点

I would definitely agree that young people are more involved in making the world a better place now than in the past.

总结全文

Instead of immediately settling down, getting married, or investing their time in a career, many graduates are actively participating in important parts of their society by the Internet and devoting a lot of time and energy to social causes like environmental preservation.

美国人写作会用到的句式

I would definitely agree that… 我完全同意……

标准范文译文

每一代年轻人中都有致力于改善生活环境和让世界更美好的人,但是,如今的年轻人对世界及其发展进步做出的贡献更为重要。现在的年轻人接受过良好的教育,也有时间、手段和意向为世界各地的群体提供帮助。

首先,由于技术的发展,如今的年轻人正更加积极地参与到周围的事务当中,也对世界做出了更大的贡献。不管浏览哪一家网络媒体或者社交网站,人们不难发现,与之前相比,现在的年轻人正更广泛地参与到社会事业中,并更自由地交流着想法。例如,脸谱网(Facebook)这样的社交网站为大众提供了一个平台,供人们发现志同道合之人,而这已经改变了我们社交的方式。或者在推特(Twitter)上进行搜索,你也能找到与你谈论着同样话题的人。利用这些新方式,如今的年轻人能更自如地了解国内外事务、分享看法、激励彼此,以及组织活动、传播思想来为世界带来改变。

不仅如此,如今在世界各地,有越来越多的年轻人在努力保护环境和野生动物。通过“探索频道”等媒体,我们可以看到他们牺牲了自己的时间来保护我们的环境。我曾听说,一位年轻的女性环保主义者孤身一人在东印度洋的一个小岛上生活了五年多。在此期间,她研究了环境变化给海洋动物带来的负面影响,由此,她呼吁政府立即采取行动保护环境。这只是表明年轻人确实在投入时间和精力让世界更美好的例子之一。

与过去相比,年轻人正更多地投身到让世界变得更美好的事业中,我完全赞成这种看法。现在很多毕业生不再选择毕业之后立即安顿下来,结婚或者找工作,而是通过网络积极投身到社会重要领域中去,并为如环境保护等事业投入大量时间与精力。

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