托福写作:Teamwork vs. working independently

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Is it more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

参考分析:

两种能力都重要。
分别陈述两种能力的重要性。针对不同的人,不同的工作环境,才会有孰重孰轻之分。
和一个团队工作更好:

(1)节省很多时间
(2)团队精神
(3)学习别人的思维方式

Topic:Teamwork vs. working independently

Some people like to work independently, while others would prefer to work in a team.Is it more important to be able to work with a group of people in a team or to work independently? Depending on different personal traits and working environments,people will have different answer to this question. I think being able to work in a team is more important for me.
First,the modern society and industry is a complicated system that requires teamwork,communication and cooperation among companies and individuals. Take a computer system for example, it comprises of hardware, operating system and software, which are manufactured separately by different companies. Not one single company can accomplish a computer system without using products and technologies from other companies. Similarly, in a company, communication and teamwork is more and more important among workers because a worker cannot do his/her work properly without interacting with his supervisor and colleagues.
Second,there are many advantages of working in a group than working alone. Teamwork provides a worker with a cooperative, friendly and enjoyable work environment. Thet eam can also be helpful in responding to a worker's questions and problems,therefore increase the work efficiency. Teamwork can also challenge a worker's abilities and he/she can acquire valuable experiences from it.

Third,the ability of working independently does not contradict with the ability towork in a team. For example, in a team environment, I enjoyed being a major contributor to my team. The fact that others depended on my work made me feel like I was doing worthwhile things. For example, I was in charge of the frontend for the GUI. This was very valuable Experience, because I know how important it is to work in a team.

In conlusion, I think the most important quality in a work environment is the ability to work with others in a team.
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