Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence on young adults. Which view do you agree with? Use examples to support your position.
参考分析:
家庭对于年轻的成年人有最大的影响
(1)父母是他们的第一个老师,所以年轻的成年人倾向与听父母的意见
(2)年轻的成年人与父母的相处时间最长,父母的性格对他们的影响最大
(3)家庭的经济情况也影响着年轻的成年人的发展。有些家庭穷,孩子无法继续念书
参考范文:
Who influence more, family or friends?
Young adults may be influenced by many aspects in forming their characters and outlooks on the world. Some people believe that family is the most important influence on young adults. Others think that friends are the most important influence on them. Both views base on respective beliefs.
It is true that friends may exert great influence on young adults. They may study together in the same school and share similar experiences. They have much in common and may share their innermost secrets that they never let their parents know. Young people are easier to make friends with each other and communicate without bothering about the so-called generation gap, which is nevertheless a common problem existing between young adults and their families.
However, it's also generally accepted that parents are thefirst teachers in the growing process of their children. Parents teach their children how to utter the first word in their life, help them to step out their first pace, witness their first love and give important suggestions when children need them. On the other hand, children follow their parents’ examples and even adore them when they are growing from little children to young adults. They are usually ready to turn to their parents who have more life experience than them for advice when they are faced with important decisions. Therefore, parents who witness most of the whole growing process of the young adults till they are mature enough are more important influence on them than their friends.
Although young adults may reap a lot from their communication with their friends of similar ages, the most important influence to their life is always their families.
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