二段：国家培养专业体育运动的利好展开(三点理由)
First，seen from positive aspect, to nurture more exceptional professional players is an golden chance of improving a nation’s status in the international arena and thus achieve economic profitability. By that I mean, a nation with great competiveness in sports events stand more opportunities of biding for international sports undertaking such as Olympic Games or the World Cup. The possible profit generated by the sale of TV rights, accommodations, ticket sales and visitor expenditure could generate immense economic value. Also, the triumph of professional athletes, to some extent, equals to the achievement of sports events career, which could fire people’s enthusiasm of building up bodies and thus enhance the basic quality of a nation’s population. Last, the self-made spirit of those sportsmen’s has a key role to play in educating and inspiring the general public. For instance, I am often strongly inspired by athletes’ relentless pursuit of perfection and ceaseless self-improvement. (142)
翻译：第一，从积极角度看，培养专业运动员使国家成为体育强国， 这是一个很好的提高国际影响力以及盈利的契机。例如，体育强国可以承办国际体育比赛，增加门票收入，纪念品销售，旅游收入，吸引赞助商。第二，专业运动员的成功即为竞技体育事业的成功，这可以提高全民健身的热情，提高国民的基本素质以及健康的指数。第三，竞技对于民众有教育指导的意义，例如，我自己常常被专业运动员自我超越和追求完美的精神所感动。
原创语料库点评：(推荐背诵)
1. seen from positive aspect v 从积极的角度看 (引导利好)
2. nurture = foster = nurture = cultivate = develop = train v 培养……
3. exceptional professional players 优秀的职业运动员
词汇：exceptional = extraordinary = eminent = highly qualified adj 优秀的
4. ……is an golden chance of doing sth 是……的一个黄金的机会
5. a nation’s status in the international arena 在国际舞台的地位
6. achieve economic profitability v 盈利(来着雅思阅读)
7. stand more opportunities of doing sth 有更多的机会做……
8. bid for international sports undertaking v申办国际体育比赛
解析：undertaking 含有风险性的事业：
9. generate immense economic value. 带来巨大的经济价值(推荐背诵;赚钱的升级写法)
10. fire people’s enthusiasm of building up bodies v 点燃民众的健身热情
11. enhance the basic quality of a nation’s population. v提高国民的基本素质(国家给教育和医疗买单的利好)
12. the self-made spirit n自我奋斗精神
13. …… has a key role to play in …… 可以发挥重要作用
14. relentless pursuit of perfection 不懈追求完美
15. ceaseless self-improvement 不断的自我提高
三段：国家培养专业运动的弊端 + 普及民众体育设施的利好：
Granted, there is no garden without weeds. Excessive investment in training professional sportsmen might make the money fly, after all, we have more pressing social problems that need support from the public purse such as popularizing free education or ameliorating medical care. An argument might be hold by some people is that to provide common people with more sports facilities could create more possibilities of enhancing the heath index amongst the general public. By contrast, professional sports facilities could only serve small group of people. (84)
翻译：的确，没有不长杂草的花园，(凡事有利弊)，在培养运动员方面过度投资等于浪费金钱。毕竟，我们有更加紧迫的民生问题需要来自国库的财政支持例如教育和医疗。同时，很多人也会认为，普及推广民众体育设施可以为更多普通人的健身提供良好的契机，相反，运动员使用的专业体育设施只有少数人才能使用。
原创语料库总结：(推荐背诵)
1. might make the money fly v 等于浪费金钱(反对政府投资政策)
2. financial support from the public purse 来自国家的财政支持(来自雅思阅读)
3. popularize free education v普及免费教育
4. ameliorate medical care v 改善医疗
5. create more possibilities of doing sth v 创造更多的…… 的可能性;
6. enhance the heath index amongst the general public. v 提高民众的健康指数
尾段：再次亮明观点 + 总结理由：
My stand is that to train a large proportion of athletes enjoys many visible virtues such as educating the pubic, kindling people’s zeal of doing physical exercises and enhancing a nation’s international influence.(33)
翻译：我的立场是培养专业运动员利好很多，例如对于公众的教育意义，点燃民众建设热情，提高国家的国际地位。
原创语料库点评：
1. a large proportion of 大量的
2. kindling people’s zeal of 点燃热情
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