托福范文:Interact with people

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编辑点评: The independent essay 要求考生通过定位,概况和分类仔细审题,就某个问题写一篇感想,论证观点。这篇作文题目着眼于现代人们沟通和交流的方法、方式。

Directions:

The independent essay usually asks for your opinion about a familiar topic. You will have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your response. Typically, a good essay for the independent topic will require that you write 300–350 words.

Question:

Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.

题目讲解

本题要求考生通过定位,概括和分类仔细审题,就某个问题写一篇感想,或就一个事件进行阐述,解释以及论证自己的观点,列出提纲明确主题并围绕主题来写作和修改文章。

观点提示

1、 提出因特网改变了人们购物的方式来强调网络购物的便捷。

2、 补充因特网另外还有改变了人群交流的方式来阐述在线交流的广泛。

模板讲解

How to do Z? Whether the traditional methods such as A, B and so on or the modern methods for example C and D have their advantages. Which you prefer depends on your own experience, I prefer C most in my point of view. As I see it, there are mainly advantages of C as follows:

This can trace back to my childhood. Once with curiosity, I (喜欢C的第一个原因)

Yet for another reason is that (喜欢C的第二个原因). I can quote a common example (举一个例子支持第二个原因).

Then why I do not like others? For example, why I do not favor A ? Because I have had a bad experience with it. (举例说明). So even when anyone mentions it, I will catch a feeling of fear.

There are still many other reasons that can account to my fondness for C, but the obvious ones have been presented as above. C is unquestionably my first choice in doing Z, though I might be opposed by others.

锦囊妙词

profound——深奥的。

conglomerate——聚合物。

exhausting——疲惫的。

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