托福写作:money and life

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编辑点评: The independent essay要求考生通过定位,概括和分类仔细审题,就某个问题写一篇感想,或就一个事件进行阐述,解释以及论证自己的观点。本题以金钱和生活的关系为论题,要求考生展开讨论。

Directions:

The independent essay usually asks for your opinion about a familiar topic. You will have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your response. Typically, a good essay for the independent topic will require that you write 300–350 words.

Question:

Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position.

本题要求考生通过定位,概括和分类仔细审题,就某个问题写一篇感想,或就一个事件进行阐述,解释以及论证自己的观点,列出提纲明确主题并围绕主题来写作和修改文章。

观点提示

1、 大量的钱可以使我们过上更舒适的生活。

2、 金钱只是物质交换的工具,满足舒适的生活已经足够。

模板讲解

How to do Z? Whether the traditional methods such as A, B and so on or the modern methods for example C and D have their advantages. Which you prefer depends on your own experience, I prefer C most in my point of view. As I see it, there are mainly advantages of C as follows:

This can trace back to my childhood. Once with curiosity, I (喜欢C的第一个原因)

Yet for another reason is that (喜欢C的第二个原因). I can quote a common example (举一个例子支持第二个原因).

Then why I do not like others? For example, why I do not favor A ? Because I have had a bad experience with it. (举例说明). So even when anyone mentions it, I will catch a feeling of fear.

There are still many other reasons that can account to my fondness for C, but the obvious ones have been presented as above. C is unquestionably my first choice in doing Z, though I might be opposed by others.

锦囊妙词

get charmed—被吸引的。

be treasured—被珍惜的。

on the other side of the leaf—另一方面。

daily routine—每日常规。

double-bladed sword—双刃剑。

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